What Happens When You Die? - Comments

  • Veteran

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    i dont know how sadder this story can get m'dear. i just about cried whole way through.
    November 27th, 2008 at 02:56am
  • Snaps_

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    i like it
    November 26th, 2008 at 05:56pm
  • M451n

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    Totally digging this.
    November 24th, 2008 at 12:02am
  • Jackles-67

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    I'm all sad, Frankie's going insane or something.
    Mikey won't talk to him, Bobby yells at him, and he'd be dead by now if RayRay didn't cook for him.

    Now you've got me wondering What happens when you die?

    *hugs*
    November 22nd, 2008 at 03:14pm
  • Forgotten Memory.

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    Hey hey hey. Haha it's still good. =] you're excuses have been processed in our megacomputer and they have popped out with an approved stamp. XD
    November 20th, 2008 at 12:24pm
  • Frank Lero

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    nyahhh, it's not my birthday anymore :):) but tyy, hahaha
    i gots yucky exams today :(
    you're gunna die :)
    November 20th, 2008 at 08:39am
  • Faitily;Yours

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    oh wow...what's up with Frank mind?

    not good.
    November 20th, 2008 at 01:53am
  • anderkarth.

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    Aww. Poor Frankie. =(

    Love This.
    Can't Wait for More.
    Update soon?

    =]
    November 19th, 2008 at 11:02pm
  • Forgotten Memory.

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    You should update!!! I have to know what happens to frankie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I HAVE to! Haha
    November 15th, 2008 at 09:59pm
  • geraldine.

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    The idea is pretty good, and the writing is good, too.
    I like it, but it's very abstract, and if you want an advice; don't click enter between every sentence that you write.
    Other than that; I've got nothing to complain about.


    :)
    November 10th, 2008 at 05:11pm
  • Frank Lero

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    sexy update. real sexy.
    the picture on the story looks like frank's eyes are gunna fall out (:

    hmm, my love for this update..
    YOU GIVE ME LADY BONERS
    November 9th, 2008 at 12:29pm
  • Alice Verney

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    poor frankie
    November 8th, 2008 at 11:09pm
  • Faitily;Yours

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    Wow, that was amazing. Haha, I'm wipeing away tears. To be able to pjut word together so perfectly to make me cry is amazing. Inever thought it could be done so well. Especially with so little words.

    I can't wait for another chapter =]
    November 8th, 2008 at 08:44pm
  • Dragonfire

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    "New Reader"
    I really feel sorry for Frankie.
    I like this story so far.
    Can't wait till your next update!!! <3 <3 <3
    November 8th, 2008 at 08:31pm
  • Forgotten Memory.

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    Ooooh so good. Poor frankie. I feel his pain. I know his loss personally except they didn't die physically but they died out of my life when an outside force ripped them aways. Poor frankie. I just want to hug him. =(
    November 8th, 2008 at 07:38pm
  • Jackles-67

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    I cried... again...
    what happened to Gerard?
    why is Frank so emotionless?
    why is this so sad?!

    please update when you can
    *hugs a million times over*
    November 8th, 2008 at 09:22am
  • Faitily;Yours

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    </3 Awww, baby Gee....I feel for you Gerard and Frankie baby
    Can't wait for more =]
    November 5th, 2008 at 01:59am
  • Forgotten Memory.

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    Hey hey hey. Sorry I haven't been on to comment. I figured I'd leave a loooong comment to make up for it. Now, you know I love ya when I'm getting on the internet on my phone to comment you. That takes forever!

    Anyways I love the updates. Poor frankie. He misses gerard so much. I want to hug him so much. >glomps frankie<
    November 5th, 2008 at 01:17am
  • Veteran

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    amazingly amazing! I had a feeling gerard died, that is so sad. i could not believe the fact it happened! i loved this update keep it coming

    i will show you love ;)
    November 5th, 2008 at 12:30am
  • Frank Lero

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    Nice story :D:D
    and as for the love thing, i think this is blatantly gunna win it for me.

    i wanna take off your skin, and wear it, thats how awesome you are *creepy smile*
    November 4th, 2008 at 10:07pm