The idea is pretty good, and the writing is good, too. I like it, but it's very abstract, and if you want an advice; don't click enter between every sentence that you write. Other than that; I've got nothing to complain about.
Wow, that was amazing. Haha, I'm wipeing away tears. To be able to pjut word together so perfectly to make me cry is amazing. Inever thought it could be done so well. Especially with so little words.
Ooooh so good. Poor frankie. I feel his pain. I know his loss personally except they didn't die physically but they died out of my life when an outside force ripped them aways. Poor frankie. I just want to hug him. =(
Hey hey hey. Sorry I haven't been on to comment. I figured I'd leave a loooong comment to make up for it. Now, you know I love ya when I'm getting on the internet on my phone to comment you. That takes forever!
Anyways I love the updates. Poor frankie. He misses gerard so much. I want to hug him so much. >glomps frankie<