Status: This story is finished:)

What Meets the Eye...

Hallie's best friend Emily Charles has just come home from a trip to England, and while there, the filthy rich family bough a Picasso. When the fact that the police has just caught one of the biggest paint-forgerers meets the Charles-family, they start to get anxious... and not just because the last forged painting bought was a Picasso sold in London.

Oh man, that was a crappy summary, but read it. It's one of the few stories I'm satisfied with. This is actually based on the true story about the famous art-forgerers, named Myatt. Besides that, it's ALL fiction. This was an assignment for my English finals. I have not yet received a grade:)
I also have NO clue what a proper Picasso's worth, so it was just a guess:)
Constructive criticism is highly appreciated:)
Also I wanted to mention that this is a finished story, so I'll just add the chapters quickly:)