Syn-derfella

This is a story that I had to write for an English project I just want to get some opinions on it.

*THIS HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH SYNISTER GATES OR AVENGED SEVENFOLD SORRY!

But please don't write it off. And I would apreciate Comments. Thank You in advance.
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