Fallen Angel's

This is a short-story that I've wrote with 2 of my friend's, it's kind of based on Angel's and God's (one's we've made up and have no relation to the real things other than their appearances and powers...etc...). Also we added our own taste to things, so sorry for the confusion, if their is any confusion. But I would like your opinions on it, so read on and tell me what you think?
  1. Part One
    Mira lives in her own little world, because if not… She was afraid the outside of her world would be scary… She was afraid of being hurt again.
  2. Part Two
    Mira shook her head no, “My mom and dad disappeared...”