Status: this is the first chapter of my fanfic and i thnk it came out okay but tell me what you think

Green Day and Blink 182

saturday 14th

marks P.O.V
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the doctor says that as soon as tom is off some of the pain killers he will have to start physio, at least we can talk to him now without him calling travis or me a magic man and truing to make wishes, i was shocked by a knock at the door, "shall i answer it?" i asked tom as it was his room, he just nodded so i stood up and walked towards the door, there was a young girl not much older than 15 just standing there silent, "can i help you?", i asked confused as to where she had come from, she didn't say anything, just handed me a piece of paper with three figures drawn on it, "hey that one looks like travis" ,i said pointing to the shorter figure with a mohawk haircut, "hey travis take a look at this, he wanted to stay by toms sidet reluctantly walked over and took the piece of paper, "wow, this is amazing" he said in his normal quiet voice.

while he was still absorbed in the picture i walked back over to tom to help him with his painkillers

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travis' P.O.V
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i studied the beautifully drawn picture of all three of us, "did you draw this?" i said in a blown away voice, she still didn't say anything she just nodded, "what's your name?" i asked trying to get her to speak just once, she took a deep breath and said, "kathryn, but frinds call me katt" , i almost stopped myself before saying ,"can i call you katt?" , again she didn't say anything she just nodded, "can i show tom?" ,she nodded yet again, i walked over to toms bed and handed him the drawing, "wow, she drew this?" he said in a tired voice, i just nodded, he handed me back the picture.

i started to walk back to the door, i got to the door and she had disappeared i looked left and right, but she was nowhere to be seen, "um, guys she's gone" as i started to turn back, "and she left her drawing behind", i looked back at the drawing to notice something wasn't quite right, "guys look at this" ,i started to panic "im sure that tom looked different before she left, look closely at the leg, its in a cast, i know that wasn't there before!" i screamed now in a full panic. "travis, calm down man im sure there's a reasonable explaination, it is a little strange though" said mark trying to keep me calm, but it was too late, i was pacing, knocking over everything in my path, everyone but me heard the smash of a glass, "travis why don't you lay down, like anywhere even the floor" said tom in his half asleep voice, tom was one other person who hadnt heard the glass smash, but still i decided to take toms advice and lay down, i let my hands fall to the floor, but the next thing i felt was two giant fragment of glass one going into my forearm and one going into my hand.

mark screamed when he saw blood pouring from my arm and hand, "oh, god your bleeding i'll go get a nurse!", i almost fainted when i saw a giant fragment of glass sticking out of my arm, and i felt even iller when i realised "where's the rest of the glass?" ,i lokked around, the floor was clean, then my back and sholders started to sting, i gently placed my good hand on my sholder and straight away wrenched it away, i looked at my hand and fainted.

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toms P.O.V
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mark came back with a nurse and a doctor to see the floor covered in blood and travis laying fae down on the now clean floor, htey kept him on his front in case the glass went any deeper. the nurse put on a pair of rubber gloves and gently lifted travis' shirt to find a lof small holes in his back.

and thats when i fell asleep
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im not quite sure what to think of this chapter its a little gory but its probibly better than the last one, hope you enjoyed my third chapter