Status: Finished Chapter 4. Starting Chapter 5. Updated 13 May
Catch a Thief
The Dungeons and Dragons fantasy genre inspired me and I came up with my short story, Catch a Thief. I am doing the best I can to write this in Deep Point of View. I want you to experience the story and each character as if you were right there with the characters in the scene as opposed to reading a distant flat story.
Names of people and places are fictional and do not exist. Any resemblances and similarities to the real world human beings and places are coincidences.
The story is a work in progress. I will add a chapter or two and character art as time allows, hopefully every week.
I give feedback to writers on their stories here on mibba.com. If I can dish it out, then I can take it. Please feel free to give comments and critiques. When offering constructive criticism please provide examples of what you would write differently which may strengthen word(s), sentence(s) or passage(s) in my story. Give a reason how/why the change you are offering will benefit my story.
All artwork belongs to me. Catch a Thief belongs to me. You may not take it for your own.
Names of people and places are fictional and do not exist. Any resemblances and similarities to the real world human beings and places are coincidences.
The story is a work in progress. I will add a chapter or two and character art as time allows, hopefully every week.
I give feedback to writers on their stories here on mibba.com. If I can dish it out, then I can take it. Please feel free to give comments and critiques. When offering constructive criticism please provide examples of what you would write differently which may strengthen word(s), sentence(s) or passage(s) in my story. Give a reason how/why the change you are offering will benefit my story.
All artwork belongs to me. Catch a Thief belongs to me. You may not take it for your own.