Pain

This is a very old story that I started many years ago and just now dug up. It's really awful and poorly arranged, but I am attached to it, like an old widow to a very ugly cat.

Because I did have such fun writing this massive gorefest, I was just going to post it, but now I've gone and rewritten the first chapter, and pretty much changed everything, so if I want to keep posting, I have no choice but to keep rewriting. x.x