How to Improve Your Story - Comments

I love this, I will most definitely keep this in mind! It sure helped a lot, especially the 'finish' part! lol.

Thank you very much for taking the time to put this up. For all of four years of writing, I just now realised how badly I was doing it. Ah well, at least now I know how to make it better. Thanks again.

This article didn't have a conclusion lol (From the How to write a tutorial one I wouldn't have pointed it out if I didn't read it.)

Anyway I have noticed errors in my writing, and I don't usually write in first person because I like to be all-knowing in my stories but this will help me out alot! I love going over my work and just writing things down that I could have done or changed or added more depth to. It helps me later when I am working on my next master piece. Thanks for writing this, it is very informative.

Nice article! Really liked the things you pointed out. It was sweet, simple and to the point.

The most important lesson I've learned is just to keep writing. Just because you're not receiving the inspiration of the gods doesn't mean you can't practice in the meantime. More often than not, practice leads to more inspiration anyways.

Good luck, all. ;D

Thanks! That really motivated me, for some reason. I have some trouble with emotion and vocabulary. Good article!

Thanks, I usually don't have enough emotion in my stories, and I have a rather small vocabulary.