Man Booted in Strip Club - Comments

I'm amused by this, in a morbid way...

lol funny ^^

thats an embarrassing law suit to file...O.o

Haha, this somehow amuses me. XD

Oh my God.
O_O
XD

I'm highly amused by this story.

Drop and holler!

I agree. It is an eye-catching article, it just needs to be reworked so it flows a little better.

I can see that happening. Stripper shoes are very heavy. Lucite just isn't a light material. But sometimes you just have to go in knowing that something might happen. You could take a shoe to the head/face area, a dancer could fall on you, the overwhelming smell of vanilla could choke you. There are all sorts of hidden dangers.

Odd story but interesting. The article could have been better. You had it broke up too much when it should flow. How you wrote it made it seem more like a rough draft.

What a way to break your nose!

haha, akron is really close to where i used to live.

That is an interesting thing to sue over.

I felt like this article didn't flow well. You did a nice job of answering important questions in this article but the way it was formatted didn't flow very well.

Haha Akron, Ohio -- like 45 minutes away from my town. XD

The idea is to incorporate the information of the 5 W's into your article instead of answering them one by one. Otherwise, it wasn't bad. Cite the source of your quote, though.

This was an interesting article, but the way you formatted it didn't flow well. You did a good job answering all the important questions to ensure you had all the details, but part of good journalism is making an article flow for the reader.