Is Chris Brown On The Floor, If He Is Run Away? - Comments

bad grammar. fix it.
title makes no sense what so ever. change it.

SHE made him do it.

The title doesn't really make any sense, to be honest.

And just for future references, it isn't really advisable to write about things involving celebrities for an article. There is way too much he said, she said involved and gossip is easily mistaken for facts. It was a good attempt, but I think a lot of the information was just speculations.

It's so sad that this happened, what's worse, the media is making such a big fuss over it. They were such an adorable couple until all this happened :(

T_T sorry about that but i don't have much experience in writing articles and at least i'm trying (i'm still kinda new to this thing.) ^^ but hopefully i will learn to do better, thanks for the criticism, i appreciate your opinion =)

I agree she shouldn't get back together with him, but (I'm sorry, I don't mean to offend you) your grammar is very distracting and the title made no sense.

The title doesn't make sense, and the article's grammar is heinous.

Fix please.

"a picture of a former celebrity Rihanna" is Rihanna no longer a celebrity? Because that's what I'd gather from what you wrote if I didn't know better.
While I think they should stay away from each other, I don't think people should give so much importance to that tattoo. Ever thought she might have got it as a kind of symbolic, psychological protection? I'm just happy she didn't get a real one, really.
Also, I'm sorry but I don't think you put enough effort into this article. It sounds like a chunk of a TV tabloid show and it's simply kind of unfinished and untrimmed.

I think they are both at fault and that the media should back off. I think that a man should only do what he can to protect himself or defend if his life were at risk. We don't know if Rihana started anything at all. We don't even know what started the fight. One magazine says possible pregency..others say STD..3 page text messages. Yet, that's just my oppinion. I heard that they are co-writing a book together on abuse.

Could we all just get over it?
Rihanna has moved on from the abuse. Why can't we all? Sure, what he did was bad. But stop dwelling over it and trying to ruin Chris Brown's career.

There isn't really any proof that Chris and Rihanna are back together, especially since she is in Barbados just now and he isn't.
Also, most of it is just gossip or just plainly untrue. I'm not really a fan of either of them so I'm on the fence. Nobody deserves abuse but we are yet to know the full storry from either of them.
Also, neither of them are 'Former celebrities' like you said in this article. They are still celebrities, both of them and both still will be until at least this blows over.

Rihanna should just forget about Chris Brown...like he shouldn't even been forgiven for what he done.

yep, >_< i really don't understand the point of Rihanna going back to him after what he had done to her. =( besides when something isn't good for you, don't use it! And in her case, since he can be no good to her, why be with him? =( its just sad....

wow. Rihanna should just stay away from Chris period.
Fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me.
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