I really enjoyed how informative this article was; it gave concise information and defined words that I probably wouldn't figure out on my own (it's interesting what the word 'karaoke' means, I had no idea!).
The only thing that detracts from the article, which is minor, is that the conclusion does not contain a transitional word / phrase (i.e. As a result,. . .) so the flow was disrupted a bit for me personally. However, it is a good piece and I would definitely recommend it to people who want to learn some general information about how music in Japan has evolved over the course of time.
probably wouldn't figure out on my own (it's interesting what the word 'karaoke' means, I had no idea!).
The only thing that detracts from the article, which is minor, is that the conclusion does not contain a transitional
word / phrase (i.e. As a result,. . .) so the flow was disrupted a bit for me personally. However, it is a good piece
and I would definitely recommend it to people who want to learn some general information about how music in Japan
has evolved over the course of time.