Very well written and a good summarization of the events.
Just two small things, One if the thing that the other commenter already mentioned with the age. the other is that there had been thirty-three, not only thirty miners, trapped.
But these two small things definitley don't have a bad influence on the article itself.
Well written although needs a little more substance and the ages were 19 to 63 not 23 :) Well done though, a good summarization of the 69 days of events.
Just two small things, One if the thing that the other commenter already mentioned with the age. the other is that there had been thirty-three, not only thirty miners, trapped.
But these two small things definitley don't have a bad influence on the article itself.