I think it was a good go at it, however, because you said to be honest, I feel like I've heard this song six million times before hand. Its like a variation on a familiar theme, you know? I think you made a valiant effort though, doll!
EHHH<NO NOT TECHNO =x seriously, im a be honest im a honest person it's like i heard this b4. But, dunt make this a techno song, plz, for me =] Cause people get confused and think thats techno. ITS NOT! =] =] Thts my 2 cents, yeah