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  • H.E.R_JB_OJD

    H.E.R_JB_OJD (150)

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    Thanks the You're thing was a typo. I meant that but put your. On the original copy it said HAVE but I wasnt using the original when I typed it. But thanks I am currently adding a verse so stay tuned.lol.
    February 21st, 2009 at 08:37pm
  • squidward tentacles.

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    It should've been "Even thought YOU'RE older than me," and "I would HAVE understood." Just saying. And it's ok, but you may want to work on it a little more to make it great. Sorry if it sounds b*tchy, but it takes a lot of work to write a really good song.
    February 15th, 2009 at 05:23am
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