Its good writing that's for sure. And I know it's a touchy subject, but some pointers: -seperate your thoughts so it's not a jumbled thoughts, pretend you're writing an essay. -with quotes it's always nice to put them in seperate things too. And that's all I can think off. Its good.
He died yesterday btw.. 4.4.09. That's why I wasn't online.. I can't handle this.. He was my everything.. & now I'm lost.. Again, I don't need pitty.. Only time can cure this..Nothing else. )':