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  • solovely;

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    I'll review yours if you review mine. The one I would recommend would be 'Mercy'
    June 27th, 2009 at 08:09pm
  • xXxSayCheesexXx

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    I reviewed it. It was good. There were a few errors grammer wise (one important one you should probably fix is explained at this site, http://mrbraiman.home.att.net/page25.html). It also got a little draggy, like she did this, she did that, but i do that all the time ^^. Overall, i give it three stars - make it three and a half. ^^
    June 27th, 2009 at 06:15pm
  • Miss Authoress

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    I'll review it...I love reviewing stuff XD.
    June 27th, 2009 at 06:09pm
  • Surrealistfemme.

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    I will but only if you review one of mine
    June 27th, 2009 at 05:58pm
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