LOL @ I'd like someone to review my new story. - Comments

I'll review yours if you review mine. The one I would recommend would be 'Mercy'

I reviewed it. It was good. There were a few errors grammer wise (one important one you should probably fix is explained at this site, http://mrbraiman.home.att.net/page25.html). It also got a little draggy, like she did this, she did that, but i do that all the time ^^. Overall, i give it three stars - make it three and a half. ^^

I'll review it...I love reviewing stuff XD.

I will but only if you review one of mine