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  • ThePast_IsReal

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    1) sounds like a great idea as is! 2) I feel like Matt would better fit the description for this one. 3) I feel like any of the guys would work for this one, but to be honest I like the first two better. Overall I'd be really interested in reading all of these especially with the way you write judging from First you Fall and Excuse the Obscene!
    October 14th, 2011 at 07:33am
  • sabrinam.5494

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    Deff the first one with Brian!
    April 27th, 2010 at 09:36am
  • LOLL.x

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    i like the 1st and 3rd :)
    sound pretty good with brian in them
    i would read it :)
    October 31st, 2009 at 08:06am
  • BlackAshes

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    1 and 3 seem pretty cool. I vote for Brian for both. Anddd I really dislike the name Beverly. Bad experience with a girl with the same name. Sooo if you choose that story, I was wondering if you could change the name? Pretty please? <3
    October 30th, 2009 at 09:44pm
  • The.Escape.Artist

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    i like the first one but with matt
    October 27th, 2009 at 04:04am
  • Ace.Spade

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    i think, the first or third one would be fantastico. oh and uh, make it a syn fic.
    October 27th, 2009 at 03:54am
  • greatbigbagofd1cks

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    il numero uno is something i would like to read most. It sounds hot. x]
    October 22nd, 2009 at 02:10am
  • awesomeme

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    I like the third idea the best.
    October 22nd, 2009 at 12:15am
  • sashbandicoot

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    YOU COULD DO ALL OF THEM!! But I think I'm more likely to go with the third Idea. I can imagine you writing it perfectly, and it would be amazing. Especially with Brian. :) x
    October 21st, 2009 at 07:29pm
  • unexplained

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    matt > brian
    October 21st, 2009 at 12:38pm
  • iraisah

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    I'm with most people here, the first or the third and the first a bit more
    also brian's a good one for this one, he looks like a sick batard xp
    October 21st, 2009 at 12:17pm
  • My.Brutal.Romance

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    I like the last one the best! I havent really read a Brian story like that! I would definatly read it! And i love the way you write so it would be perfect!!!!
    PICK THE LAST ONE!!!!!
    October 21st, 2009 at 10:07am
  • Euph0riia

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    Oh goodness, I'm pretty much unable to choose. But if I do have to, the first and tjird sound the most interesting. And the idea of Brian.. Well it's amazing in my book. Hahah. I think the whole girl corrupting the guy is over done, rather than the guy versus the girl, but any one you do will be lovely I'm sure.
    October 21st, 2009 at 08:11am
  • x.Kris.x

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    My favourite is the third one, the one with Ava. I love the name, but that summary you've got up there is absolutely irresistable; kind of like how I imagine Ava. It just grabs your attention, and it definitely has my vote. Although I think "Ava and Matt" sound better than "Ava and Brian." Plus, it would be an added twist if it was Shadows, since he's married and all. Screw the girlfriend; Matt would be screwing over his WIFE. Three times as awful (in my opinion).

    I really like the second one (not as much as the third) as well. It works well with Brian's character, but the one bit about, "she wants to fix him" kind of takes away from it. Sounds a little cliche, to be honest. The whole falling-for-the-bad-boy thing, or the getting-involved-with-someone-outside-your-normal thing, is a little overdone. I'm sure you'd make it creative and interesting though.

    All these ideas make me curious, but my overall vote goes to the third option, with Ava.
    October 21st, 2009 at 05:35am
  • manny99

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    I like the Ava’s got a game she plays one I think it would b a good story
    October 21st, 2009 at 03:27am
  • VerticalStripes

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    I like both the first and the last idea the most...maybe the first a little bit better
    O and I feel like Brian would fit well with both Story lines
    October 21st, 2009 at 02:50am
  • kristinvengeance

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    I love the look of the second one. I think with Matt it would be rockin haha. Just a suggestion.
    October 21st, 2009 at 02:47am
  • HauntingYearning

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    i like the last one the best with brian...i would definetly read it!
    October 21st, 2009 at 02:34am
  • jinx_the_scourge

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    My favorite is the second. There are so many stories about guys corrupting women, I think the idea of a woman doing that to a man is very interesting.
    October 21st, 2009 at 01:49am
  • SynergySynergy

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    I like either the first and third just about equally.
    October 21st, 2009 at 01:42am