Where are all the Talents? GAH - Comments

I don't exactly know if my poetry is considered anything close to good.....but if you please you could check it out.....I would really like some input.

Check out mine!
Maybe you'll like it.
Just thought I'd promote myself here, ya know...

Some people need to write bad poetry to get better. That's just the way it is.
You could read some of mine, but I don't know if you'd like it. I feel like my poetry has feeling because I know I put a lot of feeling into it. But I don't know if you'll see that.

how does my comment make me seem young?

Im not just saying LOVE specifically. Just anything! WRITE!!!!!! Use the brain

I used to write about love but the last year its all about my dad

Change - I don't :P
Then again, I'm the complete opposite of the stereotypical girl.

im not great at poetry, cause im sad at it, hahaha more of it's not my way of words, i more rant, my personal poetry, to me poetry could be a simple painting, to me art is not a clear cut thought is a progression of feeling, and poetry is one form of art, to me poetry can be everything, to me poetry is that of those who speak truth and feel realness reciding in their hearts

...Read my lyrics then?

About 89% of the population of Mibba is teenage girls. That's all they ever think about, by the way. Love. (: