My Eight-Year-Old Sister Wrote This. - Comments

  • dark-skater

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    Aww so cute. My little sister who's 6 makes up stories like that only not quite as detailed, and she has to get lots of help with the actual writing. Kids are adorable :)
    January 29th, 2010 at 07:13am
  • Jinxeh

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    v Your eight-year-old cousin writes better than my twenty-four-year-old brother.
    January 29th, 2010 at 03:27am
  • Mrs.IeroWaySainthood

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    My eight year old cuzin writes like this:

    the dog had lots peanuts. Yay.
    January 29th, 2010 at 02:14am
  • MocktheMockingbird

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    Whoa, that was really good. My sister's seven, but I think she's years away from writing like that.

    The last paragraph was my favorite :)
    January 29th, 2010 at 01:54am
  • YouCouldBeFree

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    thats awesome for a 3rd grader... i can barely write like that now. lol. but seriously, shes gonna be an author someday.
    January 29th, 2010 at 12:45am
  • rae.

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    "And so that girl walked away. I was glad."

    Haha, so honest and blunt- awesome!

    Sounds like she's gonna be amazing at writing.
    January 29th, 2010 at 12:44am
  • WishForWar;

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    Aww, Amaya's cute. xD
    Better than I was, as a writer in 3rd.
    Like I said before, get that kid a Mibba.
    January 29th, 2010 at 12:39am
  • astronaut.

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    That's good for the third grade. I don't even know what my writing was like back then.
    I tended to just rip off movies I'd seen; nothing original like this hahah.
    January 29th, 2010 at 12:33am
  • Lady Sunshine

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    Awe :]

    My brother is eight, he's a little genuis :]

    Lets have a play date x]
    January 29th, 2010 at 12:32am
  • Spalana

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    wow.... for an 8 year old that is BEAST!!! I wish I wrote like that when I was 8
    January 29th, 2010 at 12:28am
  • Aelf

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    Kid has the makings of a writer! That's some class-act observation right there.

    I don't think I could do anything creative in the third grade, except come up with ingenious ways of flinging spitballs, maybe.
    January 29th, 2010 at 12:24am
  • cola frank.

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    That was good for a freaking 8 year old. ._. Dang.
    Maybe she'll be a fellow mibbian soon? :D Lol.
    January 29th, 2010 at 12:23am
  • jasonsudekis

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    Aw, that's so cute! She's gonna be a famous author someday, isn't she? What a good writer.
    January 29th, 2010 at 12:22am