My First Ever Jonas Story. - Comments

WAIT A SECOND. i suppose this can count as my first story... at least, the oldest piece of writing i still have saved. x)

I twirled a piece of my blonde hair between my fingers as I stared at the educational video coming from the overhead projector. At the moment, it was describing how the last Czar of Russia was slaughtered, along with his whole family. Don't get me wrong, I love a good "slaughter," but the movie was just so unbelievably boring.

With a sigh, I transferred my head to my left hand, looking at the video yet hardly registering what it was saying. My mind was elsewhere, on the fact that this was one of my last days in New York, the wonderful place I call home.

My mother was the person to blame for that. Her expression was unreadable when she informed me we were moving to some Indian Reservation in Washington, but I think she was a bit afraid I would kill her.

After all, New York was my home. I mean, sure, it wasn't the safest place to live, and our apartment was tiny and overpriced, but I had lived here forever!

With a scowl, I doodled in my notebook.
After a few seconds, I looked down to see I had written a single word -- "Disaster."
Just the term I was looking for.

personally, i don't think it's TOO dreadful. i'm much better now, i must say. :)
'tis a jacob black fanfiction, which, at the time, wasn't very cliché at all.
i was one of the few jacob fans back then. xD
also, i'm still working on writing it.
after like, two/three years.

FAIL x)

I love cliché Jonas stories. x) They remind me of the good ol' days back on Quizilla. Um, I dun' remember any of my previous Jonas stories. Considering I fail as a writer and haven't even come close to finishing any story, I don't think I have any that count. xD

I have to say, though. I'm verrrrrry glad you've come so far. ;]
Although I'd still read your stuff because I love you. :D

Oh my God, it’s so crazy to think it’s been sooo long! I think that story started before I met you. But I do believe your writing has changed. Haha wow I remember my first story! It wasn’t even on here. It was on quizilla maddd long ago. It was called I Was Made For You and it was BEYOND cliché! It was about this girl and Joe. Dani and Joe. Haha I used that name again in We Can Change The World and the sequel We Couldn’t Change It If We Tried as well but whatevs :] Anyways so basically Dani left for college and right before she boarded the plane, Joe told her he loved her. She kind of freaked out, and then after college she came back and they became friends again after not talking in forever and it was basically the way it had always been and then they fell in love and they realized they were “made for each other” haha. So cliché, I know! But hey, it was my first one ever! I got to say my story we can change the world started out mad cliché too. I mean rock star best friend both famous? Haha in my defense though, when I started it I hadn’t read any like that yet! Anyways, haha I’m done. But yeah peace <3

Oh my gosh. My first Jonas story was so cliche too.
I was reading the first few chapters of Thinking of you, and comparing them to the ones I'm writing now. And I've grown so much.
Like I read them...and I was like ewh...how did people like this shit? Gag me, please.
But my very first Jonas story, was very, very cliche. And it has horrible writing skills too. It was how Nick like her, and she hated him. And man, it was just awful.

Oh, my gosh Katelyn! That's unbelievable! I love that you realize how much your writing has changed because honestly, it's beyond amazing! I mean, when I read the summary of "Holly", I was STUNNED. I was like, who is this amazing fantastic writer and where can I get her talent? HAHAHA. It's truly fantastic and I love you! Haha, oh boy, well my first Jonas story EVER, hmm, was a fanfiction I wrote back on Quizilla. Oh shyt, hahah, it was TERRIBLETERRIBLETERRIBLE. SERIOUSLY! It was called, and I kid you not, MOVING in with the JONAS BROTHERS? That's the title. I'm not even lying. HAHA. Here's what it was:
(And I still look at this saved document on my computer sometimes and I smile because while I loved writing this, it's just such a great thing to look back and realize how far you've come!)

I was counting how many sparkley hearts I had on my bracelet because no way was I going back into that lunchroom to face Curly stupid man and espesically Lizzy and Matt. No way Jose. I would stay here, finish crying my eyes out and then not speak to anyone as we went back to class. And when I got to the Jonas' house, I was going to hurt Nick.

I sniffled as I wipped away some of my tears on my face and then I heard footsteps. My eyes widened and I didn't even have time to get up before they turned the cornor and saw me. My eyes widened even more.

"RYAN?!" I exclaimed. "SHHH!" he told me, sitting right next to me, covering my mouth.

I was more confused than ever.
GROSS! Too much dialogue, stupid plotline, switching out of tenses! MESSMESSMESS! Hahaha, it was the first story I've ever written about the Jonas Brothers and it was all about how this girl with her huge family was going ot move in with the Jonas Brothers and their huge family after their parents got together.

FUCKYEAHCLICHEMAN! Hahaha. Ridiculous!

However, I think my FIRST story I've EVER written was in third grade, actually. In preschool and in kindergarten, I was much more of the kid that never stopped talking and got in trouble for calling out and just being a brat. Hahaha! I used to be really into painting and I had this painting book I still have when I was in kindergarten and preschool through the third grade, but I always like, imagined things in my head as WEIRD as that sounds! I just didn't know I could put my thoughts into pen and once I did in 3rd grade, I just remember my teacher reading it and crazy enough (I'm not even sounding conceited, I swear because that story was monsterous!) wanted to publish it! I was so excited and sadly, we ended up not doing so because of some reason or another, but I don't know HOW she thought that was anything amazing because it sucked some major ass. When I was in third grade, I thought it was the best story anyone has ever come up with, but now, it's almost shameful. HAHAHA.

<3

Ohhhh man, just take a look at this beauty, the first paragraph of my first story online. It was a Harry Potter fanfiction, which was basically like...every single other Harry Potter fanfiction alive. It was stupid, OH MY GOD, it was stupid. But yes, here go, feast on the awfulness:

You step out of the taxi car to see the magestic Hogwarts castle in front of you.
Who are you? you are Leah King, a 16 year old girl. You have shoulder length blonde hair, sparkling blue eyes and a mysterious air about you that makes you very unique. You are 5 feet 6 inches are quite slim.
So anyway, what the heck were you doing stepping out a TAXI car on your way to Hogwarts? Weeelll...your parents just died (no thanks to Voldemort) and you had to come live with your aunt and uncle who lived in England! You are originally American, but since your Aunt and Uncle are your last living relatives, you must transfer magic schools. Onto the story!
*Sigh...* "Why did Mom and Dad have to go off and get killed! I had such a great life in America...and...now I'll never get to see Henry again" you think to yourself. Henry is your old boyfriend. You slowly walk up the steps to Hogwarts. "Argh, this is so embarrassing" you think. Finally you find the great hall. You push open the door and you see that there are a few first years still getting sorted. But everyone isn't looking at them. They are looking at you. "AhHHHH noooo!! This is EXACTLY what I didn't want!!!" you scream in your head while you make your way slowly over to Professer Dumbledore.

My very first story was a collection of short stories I wrote in Pre-K. I don't remember a thing about them, but apparently it was a very long anthology and made some form of sense, lol.

I'm working on my 4th Jonas Fanfiction.
I never really liked them before but then one day I gave there music a chance and then came upon the FAME Saga. And now my 4th one is up. =]

I feel so accoplished in life *sigh*

Jonas fail.

I love how you realize how much your writing has changed. I remember starting writing at seven years old and my stories were so cliche that I want to burn them now. Good thing they're already deleted off of Fanfiction :D

My first Jonas story...I think it was something about their tour bus breaking down outside our house. Then they had to stay with us and when I came out the next morning Joe called me beautiful even though I'd just woken up. I want to shoot myself for writing it now xD