IDK! can u help??! - Comments

To be honest, neither of those seem like chapters to me. Unless you're making a drabble story, they just seem like snippets and very rushed. You could put in a lot more detail to them and make them longer.

Also, I'd listen to what AmorarEsDeVivir said about the chat speak.

I'd deffinatly say two, but make them longer love, far too short, but i like them.
The first one seems a bit all over the place, second is much much better!
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Neither of them really sound like full chapters...a chapter is generally more than a paragraph. Sometimes there's a prologue that's much shorter than a chapter, which is understandable; but even then, it should lay the setting and set the stage for the plot.

This sounds more like just a series of thoughts as they come to your head than like a narrator telling a story. I'm not trying to be harsh, I'm just trying to help.

Also, proper spelling and grammar are a rule on Mibba, and chatspeak is very off-putting to most readers--even moreso within a story. I'm just being honest, most people will click away from a story the moment they see that the author hasn't spent enough time on it to even type full words rather than use chatspeak. It gives the impression of a lack of effort on the author's part, even if that isn't what you intended.

The 2nd one definitely. You should try it. cant wait!