It would be awesome if you reviewed my story, "Can My Screwed Up Life Get Any Worse?" The title is a bit cliche, but its only two chapters so far, and I'm working with it.
I don't know if this counts. It's a poem that reads as a story. It's called the story of a boy and a girl. If you could check it out, it would be awesome :) if you don't want to, it's cool
Can you comment on my story, Habibi, Please :B I really need some feed back, I feel I'm doing something wrong but I can't quite put my finger on it D: appreciate it :D
I am the heartache please
much love
kay
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