I'm Not O'-Fucking-Kay - Comments

Keep! This is really good(: Let me know when you post it! I love this already(:

Please censor your curse words in the journals. In the story it's okay, but not over here.

It does sound interesting though.

Woah.. This is.. Woah. :0 Keep it. Delete it, and I shall kill you.
But, I mean that in a loving way, of course. :D <3
Why is this in Journals?
It should be in stories! It's amazing and everyone should read it. :D

I like this, but be sure to put the right compositions in the right place. :)

Tell me what you guys think of my first story?
Keep or Delete?
And Any Ideas To Add On?
Thanks :D