Kai Need's You! *points finger* - Comments

This is a little something I had myself do when I was first starting. Picture a certain place, real or fictional, then try to describe it in strong detail. After a while stop read it and then leave it alone. When you feel like trying again, go back to it. Read what you wrote and picture the same place. Don't go back and rewrite the first one. Try to describe it again.

And continue to do that. After a while you should see improvement. I did and it worked. Now if I really want to I can describe a place ten times better than I use to. That's saying a lot.

Hopefully this'll help you.

You kind of confused me with this whole thing xD
But I guess just write what you think seems right. Really get into the story, imagine that you are the character. Make it feel intense.
O.o I have no idea if this is what you wanted. But, erm..good luck?