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  • Cosmic.Catastrophe.

    Cosmic.Catastrophe. (100)

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    bahaha. That is GREAT! :D
    October 28th, 2011 at 01:42am
  • iron underneath;

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    Sorry I even bothered to help.
    October 26th, 2011 at 07:52pm
  • kaylalalala!

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    It's not supposed to be mature, it was just a silly story I wrote for a blog in class
    October 26th, 2011 at 07:33pm
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    I think you should take out "That One Kidd" because it seems to take away from the mature feel of the story. You also don't need to capitalize A Giant Sea Squid, as well as Scary Sea Squid
    October 26th, 2011 at 07:21pm
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