Theo, you've been through a lot lately, but I know you're strong and can get passed it. I sound like a jerk, but could you please read Teethmarks and Wolf Pelts? Stay strong, Blue.
I'm really sorry for your loss and your mum's loss, and I don't have time to comment swap right now. If you wanted to look at the first few chapters of The Macabre Tales of Young Edgar, though, I'll comment on something of yours when I'm not at school (so, tonight or tomorrow night).
It's got six chapters but they're all pretty short compared to what I usually write.
I'll be checking out your stories for sure.
I'm sorry about your mom's friend. Death is a horrible thing. =/
And, you have the same name as my figurative twin brother. Much love.