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Teenage Dirtbag. (100)

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Aliss, this is so fucking beautiful. I could never write anything as wonderful as that as long as I live.

April 17th, 2007 at 01:34am

Sanity Is Illegal. (100)

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thank you for that x

April 4th, 2007 at 02:05am

helen (415)

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I must say this is pretty much incredible for a 12-year-old. Your choice of words is perfect and contributes to reader's feel for the story. You're really eloquent. You're also very good at expressing feelings, hopes, expectations, etc. using words.
All in all, I liked it a lot. You're talented

March 31st, 2007 at 01:19pm

Ash Williams. (100)

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I love it!! It's great... so much meaning. I don't think I could write something like that. It's perfect. You are incredible for 12. That's great. WOOT!!

March 20th, 2007 at 05:51pm

Sanity Is Illegal. (100)

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Pwease . . .

March 20th, 2007 at 12:13am