Something random I noticed about Smutty Stories. - Comments

Yeah I get what you're saying all the way :)

as funny as it is, its so true i noticed it too but yes very well put hahaha made me laugh :p

@ xMandiblesx
Oh man, this made me laugh. I know, right? I guess some men have better control than others. I guess it depends on the man. Some men try to hard to make themselves come and then others take their time. I've come across some stories that will make a girl wet her knickers in a flash, just because they were so perfectly written and prolonged.

I beg to differ about the SYnyster Gates comment That man is sex on legs...

I've never really noticed that in a story though. Maybe cause I don't read a lot anymore, but I've never done that in any of my stories. Well...that I know of....=/

@ ShadowsFiction
LOL yeah you're right....if any of the Avenged Guys just was standing near me I'd probably instant splooge lol. But yeah, I'm going to try and work on this in my own stories. Honestly it's sad too because not all males can just cum and then instantly become hard and go another hour lol. I mean there may be guys who do that in the real world, but half the time the guy will skeet once and pass the fuck out from exhaustion lols.

I'd let Matt dick slap me, but anyone else (not that a dick would come close to me anyways) would get dick chopped. I will admit to writing them like that. I know I don't just cum like that. It takes time. I think it's people wanting to get past it. I've read some interesthing things in the Harry Potter genre that makes a girl want to take a ice cold shower afterwards. The best sex is the long, sought out sex. I'm working on making mine longer and more enjoyable. Now, if there was say, a toy involved for a few hours and said girl was holding back until they could be in closed spaces, then I could see her cum quickly.

P.S. I think Gates can just play live for me and I'd be done for.

Getting dick slapped by M.Shadows would be quite erotic. But I do agree with you with this blog, though I write Slash lol, but I have read hetero stories as well and I've noticed that. Even though I write slash, I love taking FOREVER to get to the actual sex part because it's more interesting and fun for the reader if you build up to it, not make them jizz everywhere and then that's it. BORINGGGG!!! Unless you know, you make them jizz in someones eye... Then that's not as boring... .-.

"Hell he could beat me or slap me in the face with his dick and I'd still be happy"

LOL

I hold my hands up I do this a lot, I think I get so carried away in my head with the actual sex that I forget about it haha. Mental note to myself to prolong the ecstasy! Lol

And now I'VE rambled randomly*

^ Mibba wouldn't let me edit.

I think this is why my favorite part to write of "sex scenes" is the build up to the actual act. I LOVE building the sexual tension, having the shared looks and the way it makes her shiver and start to get a little tingly in her fingertips, then....well, the point is, it builds to the sex. Not that I don't try to write the actual sex well, but I have so much more fun with them GETTING THERE. Of course, the "chase," so to speak, is my favorite part in real life, too, so...Anyway, you do have a point with this blog. And now I'm rambled randomly. Lol.

Hahaha. Holy fuck, I can't stop laughing right now. Honestly anything you wrote in that blog after you declaring the M. Shadows could beat you or smack you in the face with his dick and you would still be happy- honestly I was reading it through blurry eyes from my laughter. Don't worry, I'd be happy too:p. Anyway though, I totally get what your saying, I'm guilty of thistoo, but I've made a mental not to change my ways cus yeah, the aim is to be somewhat realistic. I think people would have a heart attack if you wrote this super sexual tension filled story and then had it where the guy just couldnt get the girl there... That would be funny. Thanks for this!!! So funny!

Haha you're welcome!

You gave me an idea for the update I am working on. I am going to prolong it, thanks! Maybe it'll make it more enjoyable