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  • Otherside

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    It would really be nice if you would critique my first story on here and send me the critique as a message rather than comment on the page. I'd really like to improve, as a writer: http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/516096/Caraphernelia-Carmen-Reyes-Diary/
    June 27th, 2013 at 06:52pm
  • kyojin;

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    Ack, I have so many stories I want some serious feedback on. Like real-deal advice on how I can improve. Here are just a few but you can pick whichever you want:

    Frailty
    Teach Me
    Gamophobia
    Hush
    Hook-up

    If you could just pick one or two it would really mean a lot. They're all one-shots if that matters or anything. Thank you so much for doing this because it's so hard to find someone to really critique my work seriously (not that the ass-kissing is particularly offensive or anything Shifty )... Then again, maybe I'm not looking in the right places...
    June 27th, 2013 at 04:16pm
  • Lady.V.

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    Could you critique these drabbles?
    Beach
    Mermaid
    Blood
    It would be great if you could. Thanks in advance. Cute
    June 27th, 2013 at 04:00pm
  • Bangarang!

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    I was wondering would you be able to check out my story
    Curiosity. It's a One Direction fic, but it's one of my favourite that I have written so far. It's a different style for me tehe could you please check it out for me Arms I handle constructive criticism well so please be as constructive as you like I don't mind
    June 27th, 2013 at 01:21pm
  • hiwagang hapis

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    I'd love to have my stories critiqued too Sad One-shots get so little attention here more so if it's original fiction.

    Could you critique my story Ave Maria? If it's possible, critiquing on my other story Atonement, which is the continuation of Ave Maria, would be nice tehe
    June 27th, 2013 at 12:45pm
  • champion;

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    I'd love to have my stories critiqued but I have like no substantial stories up. This is a great idea, though! You're awesome.
    June 27th, 2013 at 07:45am
  • Manbear-n'-Me!

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    Ohh!! Could you critique my Mademoiselle Noir?? Its a fanfiction crossover but I wrote it intending it to be enjoyable for any reader... maybe I can get a critique on that element?
    June 27th, 2013 at 06:21am
  • fen'harel

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    I would love some constructive criticism on my story Lifeline or at least in one or two chapters of it. Thank you beforehand!
    June 27th, 2013 at 05:45am
  • capheus

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    If you could check out my story Dégoûtante or Looper, I would be very grateful. c:
    June 27th, 2013 at 05:37am
  • The Punisher

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    If you crtiqued My story JudgementDay that would be amazing.
    June 27th, 2013 at 05:29am
  • Ethan Chandler.

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    This is awesome. I'd love love love it if you'd critique my one shot Like the Ticking of the Clock. :) Link
    June 27th, 2013 at 05:22am
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