Diligence's "Looper" - Story Review - Comments

@ what is wrc
Thank you. :3 Just message me a story and I'll write a blog review about it! :)& this story is really great. It's so interesting and unique.

I LOVE THIS STORY! I'm subscribed and look forward to updates. I really like this blog idea of yours. I hope I can be on one sometime soon.

I'm sure it'll get there! :) & no problem. I enjoyed it. I just wrote down what I thought. :D

Yeah, it's going to take a little bit but i'm going to try to keep it interesting. c:
Thanks so much for this. I now know what I should keep doing and what needs to be expanded on, i'm going to try my best.

@ Diligence
Yeah, that makes more sense now that you explain it. Justing knowing nothing about it when I started reading means you have to find away to explain so much more in the text, and that can definitely be hard!

I really like you're story though. It's really interesting and really unique, which I love. :)

Honestly when I started writing this story I thought of Althea as a child until she could find a human's body to use but Loopers are a spinoff of angels so I couldn't have them possessing people.

The next chapter might have a little bit more about Loopers' marks and all that but a Looper's mark is not interchangeable. Each Looper goes to Earth searching for their one mark but they can feel when the death of humans is coming and as a human dies or begins dying it is known then as a mark. So Loopers can sense other marks, regardless but they have a connection with their own. Hope that makes sense c:

@ ThatGirlThatWrites
Same here! I love that movies. :)
& I just posted another review. This once was a lot harder to do.

@ PoeticMess.
I am (: At first when I read Looper. I thought it was some spin off of the movie, Looper with Bruce Willis. ahaha!

@ ThatGirlThatWrites
Thank you. :)
& you definitely should. It's so interesting!!

This blog is awesome!♥ I'm going to check this story out, it sounds really good. I like how you started with describing the layout and then worked your way through the story. (: