Need help with my NaNo novel! - Comments

@ ladyschrei
Will do! :)

You're welcome! Let me know if you post it here to Mibba once you're finished, I'll be sure to check it out! :)

@ ladyschrei
Oh my gosh, I didn't even think of that! You're a genius! I wasn't sure if them being brother and sister would be a little too messed up, but seeing as how this will be a pretty messed up novel, I guess I shouldn't really care, haha. Thank you so much for the help!!!

What if you made the reader think there was only one stalker, if that makes sense, so it isn't overkill. So instead of maybe describing what the girl stalker does, only describe how the main character finds the stuff, like the note in her underwear drawer or whatever, and have the girl stalker act like she has no idea how it got there, so it seems like there's only one stalker. And then at the end you could reveal she was in on it the whole time.

I think having them be brother and sister would be cool.

@ ladyschrei

I thought of having both, but I wasn't sure if that would be overkill, you know? If I did have both, I wasn't sure how I was going to connect the two stalkers. I thought of having them be brother and sister, or like one be a well-liked class member, and the other be an outcasted class member.

Would it work if there were two stalkers, one male and one female? Maybe she could be friends with the female stalker, and that's how she recieves certain notes; like the girl stalker sleeps over and while the main character is in the shower, the note about the underwear is left and stalker then pretends to be asleep when it's found, something like that. Meanwhile she can still go on a date with the boy, who is the other stalker.

I hope that made sense lol!