Help please! - Comments

@ Broken Lullabies
Sigh it is, that's probably one of my biggest faults as a writer.

@ DarkHeartedAngel
Ahh, I see. I guess that makes sense. It's so easy to fall in love with characters

@ Broken Lullabies
I just like it because it's so the like the girl to say it.

@ DarkHeartedAngel
I personally think it's an awesome line. I may be a little weird or something but I love it

@ Broken Lullabies
That's true he'll probably just look like one. Is the line really that great?

@ DarkHeartedAngel
Yeah; personally, most people think I'm goth because of the style clothes I wear though I'm not, so it's entirely possible that he does look like one just because it's his individual personality. I love the line by the way; it's just perfect ^-^

@ Broken Lullabies

Thanks for help! That's what I though when I fist got him that he didn't really sound like a goth or emo which is why I don't know what to make him, but he's suppose to be one or look a lot like one because the first thing the girl says to him is "Give me back my notebook goth," and it's just to perfect apparently not to keep...

Your character doesn't really sound goth or emo... I have a sister who's goth, so I think I can help in a way... according to her, emo is short for emotional. Most people think emo's cut, but they don't. That's cutters... I'm a little fuzzy on what exactly an emo is... but I guess depressed may be a good word... like, depressed goths... I could be wrong. As for goths... well... they like wearing black a lot, with a few other colors. Everyone of them I've met so far loves Batman and Nightmare Before Christmas. They had a spitfire attitude really.... they cuss a lot.. they're amazing friends, and if you insult one, you insult all. They're really good people who usually just have issues, whether it be mental or home life. They can be extremely aggressive, sarcastic, or smart-ass at any given time. Typical music is stuff like Bring Me The Horizon, Falling in Reverse, Asking Alexandria, Avenged Sevenfold, Black Veil Brides, Pierce the Veil, All Time Low... that stuff... and this is just my sister and the people I hang around. I don't have a word that describes what sort of people I belong with. I'm just me. But... yeah... that's what I know.

Your guy sounds like me, not really belonging in any category... but if you want some sort of designation for him, he sounds a bit to me like a mix between goth and punk honestly... just my personal opinion XD I may get my sister to check this out and try to help Hope I did a little and didn't just confuse you!