All Was Golden In The Sky readers... - Comments

I have come up with an idea!!!! I've started the next chapter and it should be up by the end of the week, I promise. Stay faithful, readers!

You should be extremely popular!
I haven't actually finished reading this story. I got to where they just left Annie's parents house and arrived at the beach with the guys. I'm a slow reader what can I say!
Anyhow. I'll work on finishing reading it up to date and I'll give you some feedback :)

Well perhaps she could have a successful pregnancy. I'm not very good at coming up with ideas on the spot (hence why my stories aren't completed. Ha). Even though the conflict of him not getting intimate with her was solved, maybe make it to where it's falsely solved. Like maybe he's still got something that's bothering him.