is this still open for grabs? i'm commenting on your story rn but if it's okay, can you check out this? it's a chaptered story but i don't expect you to read all of it.
@ Death The Angel No I don't mind. And that's kind of what I was hoping for I mean don't get me wrong I won't turn down a compliment but I know I'm not a perfect writter and I would like to know what I can do better.