Back & Back Again! Happy B-Day! - Comments

Hey! Happy Belated Birthday!! Don't know you, but I just returned to Mibba too, so hey, y'know, that works, right!
All the best :-*

Hey! I never saw this blog or any of the others. My internet has been sketchy for the past week but I had already put my perfect lady on the list of stories to read. Happy Late Birthday!

@ Tipsy Returns
I'm half way finished with chapter 2. I don't think it's bad... My only problem with it so far is that in the first chapter you have it sounding so formal like Mr. Hunter is from a different time, then you ease in words like 'bro' into conversations with him which threw me off guard. And then I think it was him that had a thought process in a conversation with Mr. Parks where he called him 'dude' in his head... It throws the reader when you go in and out of formal language like that.

By the way I read your second attempt at it too I think :) This time is much better than that.

@ Lady Nikki Nightmare
Let's make a bet then Bells! I say you'll tell me plain and simple - I'm bad. That's it LOL

But but but. I uploaded the 3rd chapter, which is silly, yeah, but I'm somehow proud of it! If you read the story, do read that chapter!

I'll try to read it today and see if you guessed my thoughts

@ Lady Nikki Nightmare
Thank you!! So happy you wished me! ^_^
And really? You would read it? Hahaha then let me know what you think, but I think I can tell what your thoughts would be

The layout guy is Devil Jin from the game Tekken. He's awesome! (:

@ A. J.
Thank you! I'm so glad you wished me! And ok, I won't rec you out of your will, but mine. Thanks again. (:

#1: I'll have to go read My Perfect Lady. #2: Your blog layout reminds me of Azrael from my story Death Becomes You. #3: (this is the last one) Happy late birthday, Tips :).

Happy Belated Birthday!!! :D I hope it was great. No need to recc me. I just wanted to say hello. take care