October 1st, 2014 at 06:56pm
Trick or treat! All I really go after is the poem comments generally, so could I please have a Twix? I honestly don't care which poem you comment on because all feedback makes me happy and I feel like some critique would be helpful on all of my poems, but this is my newest one.
Thanks for being awesome. =)
Can I have a KIT KAT?
Here's the info:
Story's title: Immortal Kiss
Author: Maria - Dimitra Vetsika
Characters: the main male character named Christian looks like Lestast from the movie Queen of the Damned and the main female character is Ophelia and she has dark colored long hair
song(s) you'd like to play: Something that would fit this type of story
summary of your story (what you want the trailer to show):Christian is Ophelia's master and both of them are vampires. Ophelia hates humans thanks to her past when she was one, yet she likes to play with their minds and her master with their bodies. In the end though, all they have is each other in their immortal lives. Scenes like walking, dancing in clubs, drinking blood.
theme (light, dark, etc.): dark, vampiric, erotic
text you'd like shown (summary, detail, etc.):
When death is only the beginning
and loneliness is the ending,
then know that love is in the middle,
and blood is everywhere,
isn’t it?
So, now I wonder,
who's gonna save my little, black heart?