My First Fan Fiction - Comments

Eep, double post.

This needs to be recc'd for everyone to see. Too much amazing-ness in one blog.

Seriously though, I love how you do that thing that most young writers do where they overuse a word in the one paragraph so it sounds really redundant. Like where you used "shaking" to describe both Daphne's and Scarlet's actions. Or the really forced, almost robotic way of trying to describe a cutesy moment between two people. "He put his hand there/she put her hand there." It reads almost like an instruction manual where it's "Insert Slot A into Slot B".

Girl...that is nothing compared to how sh*tty my first fan-fiction was. Which was also a Harry Potter one!

It was so middle-school...and dramatic...with terrible writing... I'm going into shock just thinking about how awful it was........

I killed Pete Wentz in my first fan-fiction...

Oh man, reading your very first HP fic makes my very first HP fic look like absolute poop. I think I still have mine posted on Quizilla. This post just brings back a lot of cringe worthy memories of my first fanfic. I had this strange fascination with love triangles so when I first started out, that's all I seemed to write about.

I agree with @Not Your Mascot. If you ever decide to bring your first fic back to life, I'd totally read it. Besides, it's been forever since I read an awesome HP fic.

This reminds me of my first ever HP fic, which was actually about Snape and Lily, I think. (I've got to find that thing. Handwritten, you see.)

Can you please like, rewrite this or recycle the idea? It actually sounds really great underneath the weird anti-cliche, tween/teen, QZ age shebang of it. Then again, I'd probably read it even if it was written just like this because it's cute and funny

o_o This reminds me so much of my first Harry PotterxOCxDraco Malfoy fanfic. Talk about cliche and bad story planning.

Man this blog is epic! I don't know which I like more, that last scene you shared or Malfoy glared at him and hissed, “You know, just couple stuff. Back off.”

This makes me want to go back and read my first fan fictions which will no doubt be just as confusing and cringe worthy