Bad Writing Just Makes Me Cringe so Hard - Comments

@ dawn of light
Dan has the best comical facial expressions.

@ losing control.
I'm sorry I laughed. Your excerpt reminds me of my old, old writing, older than the one I showed in the blog. I wrote those pieces in my emo era.

Those Dan gifs are everything

I wrote just a generic "my life sucks" story when I first started writing. Here's the beginning of it:

I walked slowly down the halls, fully aware of everyone that was staring at me. I don’t blame them though, if someone like me was walking down the hall I’d be staring at them too.

I’ve been like this ever since three years ago, the day my dad decided to pack up and leave. He said he couldn’t handle the stress that I, my mom, my little brother, and my sister were putting on him so he left. Just like that. No warning, no nothing. Nothing until he got to the door with his suitcase. I think, no actually I know, that he was cheating on my mom, but she still doesn’t understand why he left. None of us have been the same since that day.
Oh my dear lord this is what I used to write. It just gets worst from here, I can barely handle reading any of it I also quoted Emotionless by Good Charlotte in the second chapter so there's that.

DAN HAHAHAHA THOSE GIFS ARE LIFE

but totally get you on bad written stories

@ inej ghafa
I get what you mean. I keep my old stories that are dated 3-5 years ago just because I keep telling myself that I want to 're-write' them even though I know the re-write won't happen. And no matter how ridiculous those stories are, they are our babies and they did come from us so of course they will always have a special place in our hearts.

@ little tea-pot;
I am so glad I wrote this because honestly it cheers me up in all its ridiculousness I've deleted most of my other stories but this fanfic remains on my laptop because it has 'sentimental value' (and then I can convince myself I am actually improving )

@ inej ghafa
A part of me is glad for the awful version of myself, because if it weren't for that version, I won't be where I am now. But another part of me just want to forget that those god awful stories ever exist.

Okay so like when I was like 13-14 I wrote this fanfiction about all the characters from my favourite book series being in the Hunger Games, as well as me and my friends. I don't know whether to laugh or cringe but here's an excerpt:

It’s Cato. A strong, brutal boy who can snap necks with a single twist. A is still running though, her brown hair flowing behind her, although her hair is a tangled mess.
I skidded to a stop, calling to A for her to stop. I wonder if A is really blind. A spun and around and looked at me. I do hand signals to make her come back towards me. Cato is slowly turned his head and glares at both of us. A starts to cower and whimper.
I grab A’s wrist. “OW! LET GO OF MY WRIST!” A starts screaming at me, and she is kicking me.
“IT’S CATO YOU IDIOT!” I dragged her across the sand, not seeing anyone or anything in range. I can hear Cato’s footsteps thumping louder and louder every time he gets closer.

I change my friend's name to 'A' instead but goddamn what is this