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  • Gypsy Soul

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    @ Phoebe Buffay
    I told her that after it got posted :D
    April 21st, 2016 at 03:27am
  • Brittt

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    @ Gypsy Soul
    when typing it on word, press enter twice and it should be spaced out on mibba.
    April 20th, 2016 at 11:21pm
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    Yeah she had it typed on word, but didn't know to space it for mibba.

    @ She Said Poptarts

    @ Phoebe Buffay
    April 20th, 2016 at 11:04pm
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    Yeah, like Phoebe Buffay suggested: break up the paragraphs. It'll most likely be turned away from readers if not, only because it'll be difficult to read if it's all bunched up like that. Cute
    April 20th, 2016 at 03:56am
  • Brittt

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    only thing i'd suggest right now is to break up the paragraphs. it's hard for me to read a story like that when there's no paragraph breaks.
    April 20th, 2016 at 01:11am
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