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  • Cursed333

    Cursed333 (150)

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    Sounds very interesting. It's good to read about a real relationship. Change names and stuff and it's all good then XD
    July 14th, 2008 at 03:20pm
  • Flynn Rider

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    I'd change the names, places, dates.
    I wouldn't get into too much detail.
    Leave things out - to get the reader's curiousity and imagination going.
    July 14th, 2008 at 09:07am
  • Mirneeebear.

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    I would probably change the names.
    but that's just me.
    July 14th, 2008 at 08:30am
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