All About Sex

And Sing:

Call me a dunce...but what exactly does PWP stand for?

Two things. Most commonly porn without plot.

Original it meant plot? what plot? in reference to a smut story.

druscilla love.:

Two things. Most commonly porn without plot.

Original it meant plot? what plot? in reference to a smut story.

Ahhh, thanks for clearing that up.

Pointy Fucking Shoes.
BDSM and cross-dressing.

Hey guys! I need help for a het scene. It's really a crucial part of my plot, and I've never written a sex scene before. Oh, and it's the girl's first time (but not the guys).

I fully support this topic. This is my first attempt at writing sex into a story - believe me, it's not PWP. I think my brain would explode if I didn't put any plot into what I wrote.

jessnutsss:

Hey guys! I need help for a het scene. It's really a crucial part of my plot, and I've never written a sex scene before. Oh, and it's the girl's first time (but not the guys).

If it's the first time, I always enjoy what the character is seeing. Like staring at the water stains in the ceiling or noticing how scratchy the sheets are.

So, I've written a few things, and I want opinions. Is it good? What else can I add to make it better? Stuff like that. So, here are two links. These are both in the middle of my story, you don't really have to read the whole story to understand whats going on, but it would be best if you do. : )

http://stories.mibba.com/read/226410/Go-Steady-With-Me/6/

http://stories.mibba.com/read/226410/Go-Steady-With-Me/10/

Let me know what I can do better. : )

Toxic Valentine:

Same here...its super hard for me... I have written some sex scenes they just go to quickly or they don't turn out like I expected...

I don't know if this helps, but try imagining it happening to you. If you're writing slash, it still works. How would you want to feel? You have to get into it if you want to make it great, or original at least. But then again, who hasn't been original in sex? haha.

So I want to do some reading to help me write/revise some sex scenes of my own,
But most of what's posted in this thread-- or most that I've come across-- is slash, and I'm working on het stories.

Does anyone know of any good stories/scenes to suggest?

Maybe a good mix of more tender scenes, rougher/kinkier scenes, loss of virginity scenes-- pretty much the whole gamut-- just to gather a nice general impression.
Thanks ahead of time ;D

If anyone needs help writing a sex scene, I am quite seasoned at it.

I'm actually really soon going to be writing like my first EVER sex scene
so any tips on it would be great, and it's more then likely going to be slash

Saul Hudson:

I'm actually really soon going to be writing like my first EVER sex scene
so any tips on it would be great, and it's more then likely going to be slash

What kind of sex scene? Besides slash?
First time? Kink?

Okay so I'm gonna be starting a story soon that has a male/male relationship and I don't write slash ever so I was wondering if people could give me several well written stories with slash sex scenes so that I can write it well.

I'm Golden.:

I don't know if this helps, but try imagining it happening to you. If you're writing slash, it still works. How would you want to feel? You have to get into it if you want to make it great, or original at least. But then again, who hasn't been original in sex? haha.

Hm, sounds like a plan. Im actually looking to write a uh very ...torturous story...lots of abuse and possible rape but... of course love in the end....No one seems to be interested in co authoring that with me.... XD

the moon and dru.:

What kind of sex scene? Besides slash?
First time? Kink?

probably drunken.
Maybe first time for guy on guy.

eighteen.:

Okay so I'm gonna be starting a story soon that has a male/male relationship and I don't write slash ever so I was wondering if people could give me several well written stories with slash sex scenes so that I can write it well.

Most of BVB.'s stories has good sex scenes. Her writing on that subject has helped me with tips on my storywriting.
And then there's VirtueofNecessity's story Lie Like You Mean It, it's pretty useful for like first time sex scenes.
I hope those are somewhat helpful for you.

Tried something new.
Is an attempt at stepping into the world of bondage.
I'd absolutely adore concrit and/or ideas on how to make it better.

I need massive amounts of help with a rewrite. I've been writing and rewriting drafts of an R rated sex scene for a week or so. It's driving me crazy. It's supposed to be loss of virginity, ambiguous, and fantasy blurring with reality. I fear I've just mucked it up. It's more confusing than anything else and I don't quite know if anyone is going to be able to tell what's going on. Of course, I want to maintain that ambiguity of what she's really doing and who she's doing it with until the end of the chapter.

Basically, I just need a lot of help from anyone willing to work with me.

A right mess. That's what is there right now as my least confusing version so far. I need to make it better. Any tips would be greatly appreciated. I feel sort of hopeless going back at it on my own.

Just posted a slightly smutty story.

A Helping Hand

Any comments/concrit would be appreciated.

I need help writing a sex chapter .
The thing is, it's like a casual sex encounter or whatever you want to call it, and it's between slight friends, and I dunno how I'd bring that up .
And it's a slash.