Assassins!

okay. So...i kind of did something weird...and made the tracking device be noticeable so that they find it...Cuz i figured the A Team would follow them there...find the contacts that they went to...but not Takers. Then Riley goes all ape shit on them and everyone just gets more mad. You know...for tension building purposes. Of course the A Team finds them again because their cool and then...yeah. okay.

I dunno...i hope i didn't take too many liberties and its okay with everyone.

@ the_space_between
That was so perfect in so many ways. Honestly, it was so perfect I can't get over it. I'm so excited to write the next chapter. And you did perfectly fine, take the liberties you need as long as they come out like that!! Haha.

And I was originally going to have Riley go ape shit but stop before she kills them. Do you think I should just have Riley kill one or both of them, to show that she really is a butcher? I need help!! haha

@ Carpe Diem !
I dunno...maybe she could kill one of them but then someone stops her before she kills the other and she maybe just ends up seriously injuring one. Because they wouldn't be assassins unless they killed someone along the way....then when the Takers find out it'll be even crazier!

This is very true. And honestly, Riley wouldn't be a butcher if she didn't kill someone. So I was thinking that maybe she kills Damien because well, I don't know. Seems like it makes her tougher if she takes down a guy. So then Louis get's LIVID about that.

This is going to be so much fun...

@ Carpe Diem !
I love it! Its going to be amazing, i just know it. I can't wait to read your chapter!! Someone's finally going down!!!! Hahah

@ the_space_between

@ grl_lk_moi_320
@ lovelyacoustic
@ the_space_between
@ GoodGirl;

I have my chapter done. But I'm not gonna update yet because I want to ask y'alls opinions on graphic nature of this torture scene I got going on. If you want, I could post that piece so you guys can let me know! I want us all to be comfortable with it, is all! It's not like.. insane. I actually didn't detail much.

@ Carpe Diem !
How about PM it to us? That way, it's a bit more privaye and snooping readers can't find it

@ Carpe Diem !
Whatever you want to do....I don't really care, either way, but if you want to post some, that's cool too:)

@ the_space_between
I'll PM it to you like Sree said!! I forget people go through these things cause they're open ahah

@ grl_lk_moi_320
@ lovelyacoustic
@ the_space_between
@ GoodGirl;

Hello my favorite group of girls ever!! I just updated. I'm sorry it was so damn long. I felt like I just had so much effing content to put in! Forgive me!

@ Carpe Diem !
Hahah, it's cool.. Now what should I do for mine..?

@ GoodGirl;
I suppose you can have them come in and clean up what Riley did and then have them getting ready to attack the Takers. Maybe if you'd like, Fallon and Zayn can meet secretly so you can continue to show they love each other? It's really up to your own creativity.

@ Carpe Diem !
Hmm.. okay.. clean up.. maybe, a Skype sesh with Fallon's dad, so that he can be introduced, and then, I'll switch to Zayn's POV and intro the Takers and where they are and what's going on with them and maybe, show the start of his and Chantal's friendliness...

@ lovelyacoustic
So, in my chapter, I was gonna intro what happened to the Takers and such, and I was gonna show the start of Chantal and Zayn's friendship and was wondering if there's been a loss in her past I could use? They'll be reflecting on how hard love is there'll be deepness and cheese and shit ;p

@ lovelyacoustic
So, in my chapter, I was gonna intro what happened to the Takers and such, and I was gonna show the start of Chantal and Zayn's friendship and was wondering if there's been a loss in her past I could use? They'll be reflecting on how hard love is there'll be deepness and cheese and shit ;p

@ GoodGirl;
Sounds pretty decent to me!

@ Carpe Diem !
:) oh, and the takers'll have fled to a small village in England, is that cool?

@ GoodGirl;
Englad is close to Norway, yeah?

@GoodGirl;
Her mum died. That's why she quit ballet, but she kept her ability to have grace and balance beyon compare! :) that sounds great! I was thinking about having Zayn point out the fact that she spoke in full English to them when she was dishing out orders. I'm not sure if you've already written up to that type of point yet, but you're free to use that as a segue!! :D