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  • GoodGirl;

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    @ Carpe Diem !
    A bit southwest I think.. Hmm..
    I'll research (stare at a map of Europe) and will come back to you with details

    @ lovelyacoustic
    I love that! :) I haven't even started yet to be honest. Haha
    May 9th, 2013 at 04:10am
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    @ GoodGirl;
    'Stare at a map of Europe' I'm laughing so hard at this.
    May 9th, 2013 at 04:30am
  • grl_lk_moi_320

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    @ Carpe Diem !
    I loved the chapter! Holy shit Riley is literally a butcher that's great! (well, for the story)

    @ GoodGirl;
    England is a bit southwest but it could be cool because Harry or Louis might have some connections there since they used to work for the M16. So I feel like England would be a good next stop.
    May 9th, 2013 at 05:54am
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    @ grl_lk_moi_320
    hahahahah I love that you needed to clarify that butchery wasn't okay outside the story.
    May 9th, 2013 at 06:09am
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    @ Carpe Diem !
    haha, it's generally a good thing to clarify. It's like a little disclaimer on those TV shows that say don't try this at home.
    May 9th, 2013 at 06:41am
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    @ grl_lk_moi_320
    I'm literally dying right now. You just made my night.
    May 9th, 2013 at 06:46am
  • grl_lk_moi_320

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    @ Carpe Diem !
    *bows graciously like the queen* thank you, thank you, I try.
    May 9th, 2013 at 07:12am
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    @ grl_lk_moi_320
    That's true!! England it is! :D
    May 9th, 2013 at 12:57pm
  • the_space_between

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    I just saw the latest comment our story has:( is this thing dying?
    June 17th, 2013 at 07:13pm
  • Carpe Diem !

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    @ the_space_between
    No, Sree said she was supposed to be working on the next chapter.

    @ GoodGirl;
    Any chance of maybe getting that this week?
    June 17th, 2013 at 11:27pm
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    @ Carpe Diem !
    Definitely this week! Sorry, there's been some family stuff but everything looks ok so I'll update this and Mafia soon
    June 18th, 2013 at 05:18am
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    @ GoodGirl;
    Thank you darlin! Hope all is well!
    June 18th, 2013 at 05:33am
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    @ Carpe Diem !
    It's getting better! I've been living like a monk the past week.. No phone, no computer and waking up at 6.. :/ but it's getting better!
    June 18th, 2013 at 05:37am
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    I updated and I'lm sooo sorry for taking so long! I hope you guys don't hate me for the short chapter or for the long wait.. and the chapter.. I don't know.. it just.. felt right.. and I hope you guys liked the way it ended? I could always change it, but I felt like they haven't had any hardship thus far.. nothing.. to scare them a little, and I thought this could work.. and then, they'll escape.. or be freed by one of the A Tem.. like.. maybe Fallon ends up freeing them or something? Because she loves Zayn so much? Idk...
    June 20th, 2013 at 11:27pm
  • Carpe Diem !

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    @ GoodGirl;
    Umm I mean, that's not really the direction that this was supposed to go.. because if Blackburn could catch them like that, the A Team wouldn't have been sent after them and I know it sort of throws a wrench in what the Takers were originally going to do.
    June 20th, 2013 at 11:34pm
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    @ GoodGirl;
    I don't mean that rudely at all. It's just really not what was supposed to happen to the Takers.
    June 20th, 2013 at 11:36pm
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    @ Carpe Diem !
    I know! And I'm so sorry, but like.. I honestly don't know why I didn that
    June 21st, 2013 at 01:32am
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    @ GoodGirl;
    I mean, I just wanted to be honest is all
    June 21st, 2013 at 01:40am
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    @ Carpe Diem !
    I know... but I was stuck and anted to update.. and I was sure that we hadn't introduced Blackburn as the villain yet, so.. yeah.. but I could definitely change it if you what me to
    June 21st, 2013 at 01:50am
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    @ GoodGirl;
    I hate to make you change it, but I think the way it is would mess up a lot of different things. I could help you though, if you would like? I hate to make you change it because I know you were trying to get it done.
    June 21st, 2013 at 02:21am