Assassins!

I FOUND WIFI. IM GONNA READ THE IPDATE NOW WOOIOO

Yeah I've sort of completely lost track of whose next, all I know is that Noelle is in Greece and it's not my turn.

This is what summer does to my brain people. This is what summer does.

Hey guys, I just want to let you all know that I'm leaving tomorrow and I'll be gone for ten days as I'll be sailing in the British Virgin Islands. So if it's my turn to update anytime soon I'll update as soon as I get back :)

@Carpe Diem ! @GoodGirl; @grl_lk_moi_320 @the_space_between
So, when hacking the hard drive, should the Takers actually kidnap Niall and get him to crack the code, or should they try to find another hacker from the CIA who could break into it? I think it's got to be a CIA agent because if the most capable hacker that Louis knows is unable to get the information, then probably only CIA people could.

Taking Niall could be Cornelia's way of releasing her rage upon her former partners. It can also cause Riley to become livid and go ape-crap crazy. Niall can find out the information and make the teams join sides together once they have the information. I feel like the Takers would keep Niall secured when they'd go into combat with the A Team and they'd be pretty evenly matched. The image I get specifically is Cornelia and Riley fighting against each other, and Riley pistol whipping Cornelia over the head. She falls to the ground and Riley goes off to find Niall. Louis sees Cornelia on the ground and goes after Riley but Liam intervenes because they were previously fighting with Louis being on the offensive side and Liam changed tactics when Louis was distracted by Cornelia. The rest of the teams are fighting evenly, not actually attempting to kill each other because the Takers know the information now, and Niall told them they'd most likely turn sides. Riley finds Niall and he tells her what he found out. When they walk back out Riley calls out for everyone to stand down on her team. Then she has to have an unfortunately serious talk with Fallon about her father.

So, that's just an idea. I don't think it would happen anytime soon, because the A Team is supposed to change sides near chapter 40, but kidnapping Niall could maybe happen at chapter 30 so that the rage could fully build.

We don't have to kidnap Niall though. We could get assistance by finding an old agent who retired. Maybe he was an uncle figure to Louis or Cornelia because they both worked at the CIA. :)

Let me know what you think please!

@ lovelyacoustic
Is it weird if I say kidnapping Niall sounds fun? Cuz I mean...yeah. I think that would be a good way to get the teams in a situation where they have to talk to each other instead of attacking each other.

@the_space_between
Me too!!! I think he'd be a sweet addition to add to the group. I feel like he'd bring peace with him, so whichever team he's on would be the one that isn't yelling all the time.

@ the_space_between
@ lovelyacoustic

Leave it to you two to want to capture my baby!!!!!! But I genuinely enjoy that idea, actually! So yeah, I think we should definitely go for something like that around chapter 30 because let's be honest, Psycho-Riley is our favorite Riley. And I can give them some touching moments before he's taken to ensure it's not random that she's upset they kidnap his ass?

@Carpe Diem !
Teehee!!! She is the most insane character ever, it must be awesome to write from her perspective!! I think everyone loves a little bit of Niall-Riley action. That would be great if you're up to doing it!!

@ lovelyacoustic
Trust me, I love Riley. A lot. And I'm certainly up to doing it!

I updated!! Hope you like it!

@Carpe Diem !
Sweet!!!

@GoodGirl; @the_space_between @grl_lk_moi_320
So, now we have basic points for Chapters 30, 40, and 50. It'll be easy going from one to the next, but other than character/relationship development, and probably a bit more chasing, what are we going to do for the next 15 chapters? Maybe we can plan out where the teams will go?! Perhaps the Takers will try to find someone else to break into the file (who will fail) and then decide to kidnap Niall? I feel like Cornelia and Louis should probably tell the others why they left the CIA, and that proof is hopefully on the file. I imagine that both Harry and Zayn would get annoyed by not fully knowing what it is they're risking their lives for. I can see Harry letting his anger take control, which should actually happen a bit more, and Chantal calming him down, saying that's what her sessions are about, keeping their chi and weird cool stuff like that. We could use this maybe after they try to find the next person and it fails.

That's if we want to go with this idea. I keep throwing ideas out because my mind has been totally feeling this lately. I don't mean to say "Let's do my ideas all the time!" I'm just trying to put my ideas out there and see where the story is going to go. I'm totally up for any and all ideas!!

So...where do you all see the story evolving from where we are? :)

Hey guys, I just got back from visiting family so I'll read the new chapter and try to update as soon as I can!

@ Carpe Diem ! @ goodgirl; @ lovelyacoustic @ the_space_between
hey guys, I'm almost finished writing the next chapter and I was wondering if we wanted the A-team to get a lead as to where the takers are or not?

@ lovelyacoustic
I'm writing out a rough outline, I should be done tomorrow.

@ grl_lk_moi_320
Umm, I would say yes they have a lead, but they are unsure if they want to follow them at the moment and they want to sleep on it and figure out what to do!

hey guys, I updated so let me know what you think!

@ grl_lk_moi_320
It was absolutely brilliant!! I really loved the bit with Niall and Liam! Some nice male bonding time ahahah

@ Carpe Diem !
Thanks! I really like that part :)

So I'm starting my chapter and I just want to make sure that I stay on track with what we want to do. So should i just do like.. them running away from the A-Team? Because since the last chapter left off with them finding where the Takers went so they could go find them and there would be another run in...which would then lead to a discussion about why they even stole the file in the first place when Harry and Zayn get pissed that they keep getting shot at. Or if you think it's too soon for another run in I could have them looking for another person to open the file and I could whip up some Louis/Cornelia time....I dunno...what do you guys think would be the best direction?

(speaking of One Direction...Harry twerking at the TCA's? I didn't even know what to do with myself when he started shaking his booty. I could only giggle like a 12 year old. Ugh. )

Hahaha I think another run in is fine!! That's what this story is all about. I rather like that idea!

Okay. So I'm almost done with my chapter and it's ending with them talking about why the file is so important. The way I wrote it mentions that Blackburn is the bad guy and is selling information to other countries and blah blah blah. Is that okay that I throw that out there or is Blackburn being a bad guy still a secret?

@ the_space_between
That's okay to throw that out there because it's dramatic irony. Like the A Team has no idea yet but the reader finally does