Small Town Group Write

  • blades

    blades (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    @ grow a pair
    I'm totally fine with that!
    May 18th, 2013 at 02:09am
  • swell

    swell (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    Australia
    @ pelican park.
    I think that'd be a bit dragged - I was thinking more along the lines of say, in my chapter Samara and her dad mention a town meeting to get the ball rolling but then one of you actually cover the town meeting itself? If none of you wanted to do it then I'd be fine covering it in mine in the next set of chaps.
    May 18th, 2013 at 03:25am
  • raja sahara

    raja sahara (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    @ grow a pair
    oh no it's okay das cool!
    might as well get to the point of the whole story
    May 18th, 2013 at 04:09am
  • swell

    swell (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    Australia
    @ pelican park.
    Sweetness.

    I have this stupid ass group assignment thing to do for uni so I won't be starting it after Tuesday, just a heads up.
    May 18th, 2013 at 04:45am
  • swell

    swell (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    Australia
    @ pelican park.
    Do you mind if I mention Jessica breaking Levi's heart? I don't think it's been explicitly mentioned but I figured I'd ask, just in case. Nevermind.

    Updated!
    May 25th, 2013 at 04:56am
  • swell

    swell (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    Australia
    @ daikirai desu.
    Dude, I loved your update. And you got it all in the right tense, except for like, one word when you said that hair was blowing in Jordan's face.

    BTW, I think one of us should mention Jordan or should we wait til the town meeting to be like, oh hey there's Jords the guy who was best friends with our girls Vivs?
    May 25th, 2013 at 02:04pm
  • blades

    blades (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    @ grow a pair
    I agree. that's a smart idea.
    May 25th, 2013 at 02:05pm
  • blades

    blades (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    @ daikirai desu.
    also DUDE YOUR CHAPTER WAS PERFECT
    May 25th, 2013 at 02:07pm
  • swell

    swell (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    Australia
    @ blades
    Okay, sweet. I was reading Gabby's chapter when I realised that Jords had been neglected in our storylines, before realising he was supposed to be that way XD
    May 25th, 2013 at 02:10pm
  • noriko.

    noriko. (330)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    25
    Location:
    Austria
    @ grow a pair @ blades
    AW THANK YOU I LITERALLY WAS LIKE 'OH WHEN WAS I MEANT TO UPDATE?'

    I kinda get how Jord's neglected, though.
    He's one of those people you either know exists or is like a speck of dust.

    Does that make sense? Unsure
    May 25th, 2013 at 02:14pm
  • swell

    swell (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    Australia
    @ daikirai desu.
    I getcha. We all know Jordan exists, Samara just chooses to forget he exists because she's happy being in her own world XD
    May 25th, 2013 at 02:21pm
  • blades

    blades (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    @ grow a pair @ daikirai desu.
    I think that's the whole point, too. like, we are all there worrying about our own fairly miniscule problems (like aside from the whole town thing, but like our love subplots) while Jordan is mourning his best friend. it's a very lonely thing. everyone is kind of in their own little worlds even though Jordan needs someone.

    sorry, I just got caught up in how kind of awesome that is. like, terrible for Jordan, but a good idea for a plot.
    May 25th, 2013 at 02:25pm
  • noriko.

    noriko. (330)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    25
    Location:
    Austria
    @ grow a pair
    Lawls. lmfao

    @ blades
    Jordie is a lonely soul.
    *cries*
    May 25th, 2013 at 02:31pm
  • raja sahara

    raja sahara (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    @ daikirai desu. @ blades @ swell
    uh sorry for the late reply. graduation parties are everywhere!

    but Alex, Gabby, your chapters were amazing. I don't give y'all enough credit (PUBLICLY), but you're both amazing writers. I really loved Jordan's chapter. So much emotion in it. Poor, poor guy. I feel for him. I can kind of imagine Jordan and Levi creating some sort of friendship/bond thing that's like weird and adorable at the same time. Like Levi can look out for Jordan all the time? Idk I imagine weird things.

    Anyways, I have no idea what I'm going to do for my chapter because the idea I had has been thrown out the window, but I'll think of something. Kristina, I still want to do the whole Levi-running-into-Julienne thing BECAUSE IT'S CUTE AF but idk if I should write the meeting and do it then, or write their encounter and you can write the meeting?
    May 25th, 2013 at 06:44pm
  • swell

    swell (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    Australia
    @ pelican park.
    Yay for graduating! Were you one of the ones that were crying because it was over or crying because thank god it's over?

    Oh, sorry about that. What was your idea? Maybe there's a way you can chuck it in or something?
    May 26th, 2013 at 03:11am
  • blades

    blades (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    @ pelican park.
    YEAH DO IT. well either way - you can write the meeting or their encounter and I'll do the opposite. it may be kind of interesting to have the meeting from Jules's perspective since she's joining the company.

    when do we want to say that they're planning on turning it into a resort facility or something?
    May 26th, 2013 at 06:46am
  • swell

    swell (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    Australia
    @ blades
    We can put that in the meeting. I'm not sure when else they'd release this new piece of information, unless it's one of the mayor's secrets that suddenly gets reported in the newspaper and everyone freaks out because they didn't know about it. Your choice, really. I'm not fussed.
    May 26th, 2013 at 07:13am
  • raja sahara

    raja sahara (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    @ blades
    okay so since Jules is the architect on the project, I think the meeting in her point of view would be better and more interesting than Levi's, so I'll just write their encounter.

    @ swell
    hahaha I haven't officially graduated yet (WEDNESDAY) so I'll let you know then. I think I may cry over a little bit of both hehe.
    May 26th, 2013 at 07:41am
  • raja sahara

    raja sahara (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    @ swell @ blades @ daikirai desu.
    okay so I was just thinking this, but maybe these four could have a little get together of their own right after the meeting, when they've all seen each other, knowing that each one of them is back? like at the lake or something and then maybe then they could be convinced to support stopping the destruction? because I'm writing it right now and Levi doesn't care at all what happens to the lake and if we all want them on the same side, I don't know if Levi should continue to not care or if he should be convinced otherwise.

    Except Jules might not be a part of this.

    But does that make any sense?
    May 28th, 2013 at 08:27pm
  • blades

    blades (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    @ pelican park.
    I think that makes sense. Jules could come along but just try and be discreet. that would make it even more scandalous when Levi finds out that she's working for the construction team.
    May 28th, 2013 at 09:27pm