@ pelican park. I think that'd be a bit dragged - I was thinking more along the lines of say, in my chapter Samara and her dad mention a town meeting to get the ball rolling but then one of you actually cover the town meeting itself? If none of you wanted to do it then I'd be fine covering it in mine in the next set of chaps.
@ pelican park. Do you mind if I mention Jessica breaking Levi's heart? I don't think it's been explicitly mentioned but I figured I'd ask, just in case. Nevermind.
@ daikirai desu. Dude, I loved your update. And you got it all in the right tense, except for like, one word when you said that hair was blowing in Jordan's face.
BTW, I think one of us should mention Jordan or should we wait til the town meeting to be like, oh hey there's Jords the guy who was best friends with our girls Vivs?
@ blades Okay, sweet. I was reading Gabby's chapter when I realised that Jords had been neglected in our storylines, before realising he was supposed to be that way
@ grow a pair @ daikirai desu. I think that's the whole point, too. like, we are all there worrying about our own fairly miniscule problems (like aside from the whole town thing, but like our love subplots) while Jordan is mourning his best friend. it's a very lonely thing. everyone is kind of in their own little worlds even though Jordan needs someone.
sorry, I just got caught up in how kind of awesome that is. like, terrible for Jordan, but a good idea for a plot.
@ daikirai desu. @ blades @ swell uh sorry for the late reply. graduation parties are everywhere!
but Alex, Gabby, your chapters were amazing. I don't give y'all enough credit (PUBLICLY), but you're both amazing writers. I really loved Jordan's chapter. So much emotion in it. Poor, poor guy. I feel for him. I can kind of imagine Jordan and Levi creating some sort of friendship/bond thing that's like weird and adorable at the same time. Like Levi can look out for Jordan all the time? Idk I imagine weird things.
Anyways, I have no idea what I'm going to do for my chapter because the idea I had has been thrown out the window, but I'll think of something. Kristina, I still want to do the whole Levi-running-into-Julienne thing BECAUSE IT'S CUTE AF but idk if I should write the meeting and do it then, or write their encounter and you can write the meeting?
@ pelican park. YEAH DO IT. well either way - you can write the meeting or their encounter and I'll do the opposite. it may be kind of interesting to have the meeting from Jules's perspective since she's joining the company.
when do we want to say that they're planning on turning it into a resort facility or something?
@ blades We can put that in the meeting. I'm not sure when else they'd release this new piece of information, unless it's one of the mayor's secrets that suddenly gets reported in the newspaper and everyone freaks out because they didn't know about it. Your choice, really. I'm not fussed.
@ blades okay so since Jules is the architect on the project, I think the meeting in her point of view would be better and more interesting than Levi's, so I'll just write their encounter.
@ swell hahaha I haven't officially graduated yet (WEDNESDAY) so I'll let you know then. I think I may cry over a little bit of both hehe.
@ swell @ blades @ daikirai desu. okay so I was just thinking this, but maybe these four could have a little get together of their own right after the meeting, when they've all seen each other, knowing that each one of them is back? like at the lake or something and then maybe then they could be convinced to support stopping the destruction? because I'm writing it right now and Levi doesn't care at all what happens to the lake and if we all want them on the same side, I don't know if Levi should continue to not care or if he should be convinced otherwise.
@ pelican park. I think that makes sense. Jules could come along but just try and be discreet. that would make it even more scandalous when Levi finds out that she's working for the construction team.