Small Town Group Write

ignore this please

@ swell
Jordan wants to save it, but he wants to save it for Viv, and Viv alone, so if he hears any other (in his mind) 'bullshit' he'll be all like oh haw naw I don't care 'bout daaaat

@ daikirai desu.
Oooh, okay. Maybe I'll mention something really briefly or really subtly about Viv and then Jordan's face changes and then Samara changes the topic so Jordan isn't sad/moody and then goes oh haw naw I don't care 'bout daaaat?

@ swell
OH YES.
I'm getting the feeling Jordan is an independant black woman who don't need no man, stuck inside a scrawny manwoman

@ swell
I think that sounds just about right!

@ swell
For me, yeah Levi is basically indifferent :)

@ daikirai desu.
Do the readers know that Jordan was biffs with Vivs?? UGH I CAN'T REMEMBER ANYTHING
Oh and Samara talked shit about him, right? I think I said this to you once but I can't remember ahh time to read through this thread again. Nm.

Updated! Sorry that it's shorter than usual, but I didn't really have much else to say

@ swell
I'm not really sure what to do with my chapter, so I was thinking that a flashback would be good?

But I'm confused at what actually happened to Viv I'm too slow when it comes to this stuff...

@ daikirai desu.
I think Raveena's chapter is the interlude/flashback?

I think her and Jordan came to the party, then she started drinking and wandered off, some guy came onto her and they were hooking up when he went too far (or maybe she didn't want it at all?) so she tried to run away in some cliff cave thingy and then the water came and took her out to sea and she died by drowning.

@ swell
Oh okay then
I'mma just write about Jordan's phobia then

@ swell
Oh, and based on Viv's personality (from what I imagine I mean she was biffles with Jordan) she wouldn't have wanted it. But idk because she was drunk.

@ daikirai desu.
I think originally we said she would want it but yeah, Viv's too cool to want it. Why would she need anyone when she has someone as fab as Jordan?
Maybe because it was their last (or first) high school party, they both had a drink, the almost rapist guy slipped a roofie in her drink or something? Or she kept drinking?

@ swell
I like the roofie idea. Like, to me (personally), Viv is the take-no-shit type of girl, so for her to go that far is like, hm...

I only say that because she was like, Jordan's 'protector' and so I don't really see her wanting it.

Idk

@ daikirai desu.
Okay good because I didn't see her continuing to drink either Viv's your character, so do whatever you want with her :)
Every time I read a chapter or I'm writing this I feel bad for Jordan. Our character's problems don't seem like much compared to losing your best friend, idk

@ swell
I picture Viv to be a calmer version of deathrock
Jordan's tough Jordan is a manly man

@ daikirai desu. @ swell @ blades
wait hode up, is my chapter (in itself) the flashback? Or am I writing my chapter and then after that I write the interlude (so I write two consecutive chapters)????????? Is that what we decided? I forget everything and I'm also too lazy to find that post D:

Also, Alex, your chapter was gr8 :)

@ pelican park.
Thanks :)

Okay. RIGHT I'VE FOUND IT.

The flashbacks will be flashbacks from the party, like what happened in our views (Jordan with losing Viv, Levi with the Jessica thing, etc) and then the interludes would be from the victim's POV, of what happened leading up to her death. BUT the interlude wouldn't substitute one of our own chapters, so Raveena if you did an interlude you'd write two chapters for that round.

@ daikirai desu.
If you haven't started, you could do the flashback within your chapter like you planned to or if you have already written it, you could add it in if you wanted.

@ swell
AH THANKS. I think I now have an idea for what to do. But basically, Viv has some sort of encounter with all four of the main characters that somehow led to her getting roofied and then killed. So, my interlude will be her encounter with Levi.........yes?

@ pelican park.
Yep, pretty much. I think our characters all feel guilty for her eventual death but in reality none of us really played a part. I mean, we did, but like, we didn't if that makes sense?

I shall do the flashback, but I'm going to start it from like, before the party. On their way to the party. Is that okay?