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@ big bad wolf.

I agree three is way too much.

I think that could work! Ashton gets a call and makes her haul ass back to London because the shit has hit the fan.

@ Anchor and Hope.
so this is how it all gets done. So this chapter we introduce the whole "Kavita's second thoughts" and then the one after will be her last chapter and appearance. That way, your next chapter can include Ashton's family and Niall meeting them all.

@ Anchor and Hope.
@ big bad wolf.

I'm at work at the moment but tonight I'm going to set out a timeline and see how we can work around it! Becca, I'm thinking just like the Pact, we should maybe do a timeline for each of our chapters? I can put it on the first page for everyone to refer back too!

@ antidote.

I think a timeline is a great idea, it's so ridiculously helpful. I'll try and work on a little something for Ash and Niall. How many chapters do we want to make this? (Also, I was thinking- maybe since vita is leaving and ellie is going for Zayn, we should bring in Sophia Smith eventually)

(Heads up- I'm going to be suuuuuper in and out the next few days. I have graduation rehersals and graduation)

@ Anchor and Hope.
@ antidote.
I agree. An outline would be a huge help. I'm at school right now but if you need any help just shout out. :)

@ Anchor and Hope.
@ big bad wolf.
@ antidote.
I'm at school too, but keep me posted! I can help out if needed!!

@ dancingskiingwriter
@ big bad wolf.
@ Anchor and Hope.

Thanks girls, will be throwing something together shortly and we can work from there! I'll hopefully then work out how long it will be as well!

So it's all very confusing, but I'm trying to worm everything in.
I'm currently doing the timeline and trying to work out a few bits, so hear me out and see what you think.

Firstly, I agree there should only be two more Kavita chapters (including the one Becca is writing) so not this one, but the next one is her last appearance. But if we're going by Emma's idea, then did you want to have the cheating part in a just after because I have some way of fitting it in.

Emma, you mentioned that Vita's leaving could trigger some second thoughts, but maybe it's the cheating scandal that pushes everyone to breaking point.

So, Chapter 30 (Vita's last chapter) is where she decides to leave. Though somehow the girls clock on (maybe one finds a scrunched up attempt of a letter in the bin) and call Ashton to get home now because thing's are rocky and they need her help. When she returns, their attempts at getting her to stay don't work and the girls agree to see her off at the airport. I'm thinking that night, Harry, Niall and Liam head to a bar to console Liam who is a little sad at Vita's leaving. Liam get's a little drunk and Niall agrees to take him home, whilst Harry decides to stay for one more drink. Enter Ashton, who was there to see Niall but didn't know he had already left. Ashton stays and she and Harry have some more drinks, getting a little worse for wear, both opening up to each other. Back of taxi or something, they are caught making out by papz (or however you want them to be caught).

I was thinking from here, Simon comes over early next morning with the newspaper (and pissed they ruined it all) that will be hitting stands in a few hours. When he holds it up, I can see Niall just freezing and Taylor running off to be sick or something, whilst Ashton and Harry try and amend their mistake. This is where things start to break. Wendy could be scared that Louis might do the same to her, Ellie could think she never signed up for this, or perhaps be the one who stays? It's up to you guys.

I shall post the timeline on the front page in a second, but it can be amended and we can discuss certain bits.

@ dancingskiingwriter
@ big bad wolf.
@ Anchor and Hope.

Didn't tag you above! Also check out the front page for a draft of the chapter outline for the Vita leaving and airport scene!

@ antidote.
@ big bad wolf.
@ dancingskiingwriter

Hey guys! Vita's chapter is up.

@ antidote.

I just looked over the outline and it looks perfect!

In 28 it's going to be a lot of "progress" (of sorts). I think Niall is going to get a really bad sunburn and Ashton's mom makes him stay in bed and she has to take care of him?

In the next Vita chapter, i think I'll start it with her sneaking out of Liam's room? (Maybe they spent the night together, and that's the catalyst she needs to decide she wants to leave, so in the middle of the night she sneaks back to her room, writes the note and she leaves?

In 33, maybe we shouldn't see Vita off (especially if she took off in the middle of the night?) but maybe it could be the girls packing up her things to ship back to Delhi and as they pack they start to talk and things just go ass up, and after they finish is when Ashton accepts Harrys invite to the bar? (sorry, this is screwing up the timeline a little bit)

I plan on ending the airport chapter at Ashton blacking out? So Emma will have to pick up right at the code blue being called.

How does all that sound?

@ Anchor and Hope.
That's absolutely fine. Mine was just a rough draft of how we could somehow get about it, but either way works for me. Mine was just a draft to inspire more ideas anyway

It could work. Taylor could be funny with Harry, distancing herself after the talk the girls have. So Harry turns to Ashton to talk too!

@ antidote.

OH! That could be perfect! I can see Harry and Ashton sitting at the bar with a row of shots in front of them?

"This one, is for Taylor's bum- 'cause it's *hiccup* bloody perfect!"

"Well this shot, is for Niall's penis! Because it's just so pretty-" and Harry holds up a shot?

"To Niall's penis!" and that's when the bartender is like..."

that's it. I'm calling you two a cab- you just toasted to your mates knob!"

@ Anchor and Hope.

OH MY, that's perfect!

@ antidote.

I just imagine the atmosphere in the cab is even worse, though- I keep thinking "Sex" by The 1975 should be playing and that's Harry's. On a side note, I'm totally debating making Ashton puke on those god awful suede boots Harry wears all the time.

@ Anchor and Hope.
Definitely have her puke! I can imagine him squealing like a girl when it comes to those horrid boots

It will be so heartbreaking having to write or describe how Taylor will feel when the news breaks on the two kissing. I've changed the outline and added that the night it happens, her and Harry argue and he admits a lot to her when they're shouting at each other; and like all through the night, she is trying to ring him, feeling like she is ready to finally open up to him. Niall and her will be devastated. I bet it'll be hard writing such a scene that puts Ashton in a bad light

@ antidote.

AAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNND we have boot puke. I can see Ashton slapping him? "You're like the brother I never had!"

"YOU LOON! YOU HAVE FOUR BROTHERS!"

"Well...the SANE brother I never had!" and she wipes at her tongue.

It's going to break my heart to make Ashton the bad person

When everyone's at the hospital, I'm thinking the doctors ban everyone form entering (because maybe she's in intensive care?) and they wont allow anyone that's not family in her room.

@ Anchor and Hope.
They can all be gathered in the waiting room (perhaps a private one because of the guys) and they'll be a lot of tension between like Niall, Taylor and Harry! I can see Harry and Niall being escorted out after Niall like jumps Harry and starts throwing punches.

@ antidote.

YES.

Meanwhile the doctor is trying to get some kind of answers out of them? "We're waiting on her parents to arrive, does anyone know what exactly is wrong with this poor girl?"

And Niall goes all red? "She uh...she has a heart condition...or something. I don't remember."

And the doctor is like..."how about you look in her purse? Maybe you'll find a medication?" and they all start arguing and calling each other stupid and lashing out at each other? And the doctor rolls his eyes, "No wonder the poor girl has been sobbing since we brought her in."

@ Anchor and Hope.
@ antidote.
I love these ideas, guys. Especially the one where Ash pukes on Harry's shoes. I think that's genius. God knows he needs to get rid of the ghastly things. There are no words to describe those things.

I'm good with picking up right during the cold blue. Lol. I think all these ideas are great! :)