1D Pregnancy Co-write

@ ace merrill.
@ Halliwell
@ EmzyStilinski

So to clarify:
Kori gets along with Lexi and Iona
Iona gets along with Kori
Hadlee gets along with Lexi
and Lexi tries to get along with everyone, but Iona doesn't get along with her.

Does that sound right?

@ Properly Improper
Sounds pretty good to me

@ Halliwell
I can see Iona and Kori kind of like... leaning against the wall while everyone is dancing.

@ Properly Improper
and that sounds about right!

trying to get this started again

Chapter Outline
Prologue: One Direction meeting with management to discuss tour. Brings up bringing along a girl, which starts with the other guys wanting to bring their girlfriends on tour with them.
--- January
Chapter 1 (Molly): Introduce Lexi, and making sure she can come on tour without disturbing other life priorities.
Chapter 2 (Ema): Introduce Hadlee, tells Zayn about pregnancy, and making sure she can come on tour without disturbing other life priorities.
Chapter 3 (Halliwell): Introduce Iona, and making sure she can come on tour without disturbing other life priorities.
--- February
Chapter 4 (Calli): Introduce Kori, time jump, finishes life priorities, goes on tour.
Chapter 5 (Molly): on tour, first concert, girls get to know one another.
Chapter 6 (Ema): on tour, having pregnancy symptoms?
Chapter 7 (Halliwell): on tour, mention Kori leaving to go back to school.
Chapter 8 (Calli): Back home, missing Liam, time jump, goes back on tour, sleeps with Liam?
Chapter 9 (Molly):
...
...
Chapter ##

OK, what months will we be writing in? Because I'm trying to figure out when Kori will conceive if she's going to give birth after the story finishes. I'm gonna get her to sleep with Liam on tou the second time she goes on, so she'll get on tour for a few days, goes back home, and the second time she goes back on tour she'll sleep with Liam, and then she'll have her doctor check up.

@ Halliwell
@ Properly Improper
@ EmzyStilinski

@ ace merrill.
I think that sounds good for Kori. It would work. When I get home, I'll put up my new profile

@ ace merrill.
That looks good to me! :) Thanks for writing that out!

@ ace merrill.
That looks good to begin with. Well, if Kori sleeps with Liam in the February and gets pregnant, she would be due around late November/early December, so after the story ends, whereas if she sleeps with him any later, it'll be the following year that she'll give birth.

@ Halliwell
OK, thank you! I just wasn't sure when the story will end. Are you still writing the prologue?

@ Properly Improper
@ EmzyStilinski

Are we just about ready to have a second try at this?

@ ace merrill.
Yep. I need to post my new bio fo Hadlee. Ill do that after I get some rest.

@ ace merrill.
@ EmzyStilinski
@ Halliwell

Yeah! I'm finished with college applications and I think I know where I'm going, so I can stop worrying about that and start focusing on writing! I'm ready when y'all are! :)

@ Halliwell
@ Properly Improper
@ EmzyStilinski

Got a new banner and layout for the rewrite!


I'm ready to go! I think once Halliwell writes the prologue, it'll be your turn, Molly, to write! So maybe you can start writing your chapter so it can be ready once the prologue is posted?

@ ace merrill.
I'll get right on it! :)

@ Properly Improper
@ ace merrill.
@ EmzyStilinski

This is what I got for the prologue. I wasn't sure how to end it, so I'm hoping you guys can help with that, and I can change anything that needs it.

Quote:

"Boys, it's great to see you," One Direction's manager greeted the five of them as they walked into his office. "It's the new year already, where has time gone?" He chuckled at his own line as they all took their seats.

"Will this take long? I promised I'd take my girlfriend out," Niall asked, earning sniggers from the others.

"No, no, it shouldn't take long. You guys already know how this year is planned, with the promotional tour, the album dropping and then the tour to coincide with the album. Now we officially have the dates. The promo tour begins on the last week of February, with your first show two days after. You'll be on the road for just over two weeks to play twelve shows. The album drops on the 17th of May and there will be a few signing sessions that you are to attend for the remainder of the month and a bit into June. At the beginning of July, you're scheduled for an interview - only two of you have to do it, so I'll let you decide amongst yourselves - and the world tour begins in the middle of August. Any questions?"

Harry raised his hand. "We're in hotels, right? 'Cos I was thinking that I could bring Lexi along? Just because she's due in May and I don't want to be too far away from her," he said.

Their manager rubbed the back of his neck. "I'm not sure about that, Harry."

"We have enough room. I wouldn't be able to focus properly if I knew something happened and I wasn't there for her."

Louis elbowed him. "That's what you call whipped."

"Hey, none of that here," the manager interrupted before Harry could reply. "You're right, we do have enough room. She can come on the condition that any relationship drama, no matter how small, does not happen on the tour. She's not to be a distraction on show days but you guys will be free to do what you please on your days off."

Harry immediately beamed and pulled out his phone. Liam suddenly perked up. "If she's coming then Kori should be able to come," he protested.

"Isn't she in uni?" Niall wondered.

Liam shrugged. "Yeah, but I'm sure she wouldn't mind missing some time."

"If they both come, I want Hadlee to come," Zayn announced, speaking for the first time since arriving. "She might not be pregnant or a student but she's always wanted to come on tour."

Their manager sighed and rubbed his forehead before looking at Niall. "And I suppose you want your girlfriend to come as well?"

He grinned. "She wouldn't be opposed to coming."

"Very well. I'll think it over and talk to the relevant people, but if they must come, I guess they can."

....

@ Halliwell
ooh i like it. Im not sure how to finish it. Maybe the other girls will have an idea

@ Halliwell
I like it!

I think you could end it after "he grinned." like:

Their manager sighed and rubbed his forehead before looking at Niall. "And I suppose you want your girlfriend to come as well?"

He grinned.

Because that shows that all the girls are going on tour, but it doesn't leave you grasping for more words.

@ Properly Improper
To me, 'he grinned' doesn't seem like much of an ending.

@ Properly Improper
@ EmzyStilinski
@ ace merrill.

Also do you guys want me to post the prologue?

@ Halliwell
Maybe end it with "She wouldn't be opposed to coming"? and then you can add something like "And she wasn't" or something. I'm not sure, ending chapters isn't my strong suit.

And yes, please do! :)

@ Halliwell
@ Properly Improper

Hi! Sorry I didn't reply! I like what you have so far!
Also what are we gonna do about the summary?

@ Properly Improper
I might just end it with the manager's last line. There just wasn't a better way I could think of to end the prologue with it sounded ended as well.

@ ace merrill.
Maybe we don't need a summary and just have what's already there? I can't remember what we had before.