1D Pregnancy Co-write

@ Halliwell
We have "summary here" and "it was a crazy coincidence that brought them together but the experience will keep them close."

@ Properly Improper
We could just remove "summary here" and leave it at that.

@ Halliwell
Or we can just add an excerpt of the prologue? I just feel like it doesn't really say much about the story, so I kind of want a little more in the summary.

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"You're right, we do have enough room. She can come on the condition that any relationship drama, no matter how small, does not happen on the tour. She's not to be a distraction on show days but you guys will be free to do what you please on your days off."

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"She might not be pregnant or a student but she's always wanted to come on tour."

Their manager sighed and rubbed his forehead, looking at the last member of One Direction (or something). "And I suppose you want your girlfriend to come as well?"

He grinned. "She wouldn't be opposed to coming."

@ Properly Improper
@ Halliwell

@ ace merrill.
@ Properly Improper

How about something like "Between an album release and a worldwide tour, the boys of One Direction have enough on their plate for the year. Too bad life is dealing them with their toughest challenge yet."

@ Halliwell
Well... LOOK AT THAT.
That is great, actually. I love that!

@ ace merrill.
Should I post the prologue now then?

@ Halliwell
Yeah!

@ ace merrill.
@ Properly Improper

Posted!

@ Halliwell
Our first comment omg why do you think they're wondering if it's gonna be funny? Hopefully we can pull it off

Woo, I missed out on some stuff but I like the summary idea and Im excited.

@ EmzyStilinski
@ ace merrill.
@ Halliwell

Posted my chapter! Let me know if I should change anything! :)

@ Properly Improper
Oh i lovewd it soooo much!!! So cute

@ Halliwell
@ ace merrill.
@ Properly Improper

Just changed it a bit:

Hadlee is the type of girl who is stubborn,carefree, and slightly rambunctious. When she becomes pregnant three months before her twentieth birthday, she melts down. She immediately tells Zayn which was happy nonetheless and it reassured Hadlee but she still feels she won't be able to handle her decision and won't tell Zayn due to his excitement. Halee decides to keep it a secret for awhile, even keeping it from her brother. She also wants to keep away from media due to her anxiety but has a tendency of being reckless. Hadlee goes on tour with Zayn with his constant nagging, wanting her with him. She keeps her mouth shut about having second thoughts and tried to be happy but sends herself into stress and depression. She decided to give the baby up for adoption whether Zayn likes it or not. Hadlee ends up going into premature labor about a 5 weeks before her due date which causes the baby to have breathing issues. She decides to keep the baby after laying her eyes on him or her.

@ EmzyStilinski
Thanks!
And your new description sounds good! The only thing is that Lexi is the youngest. She's a year younger than Hadlee :) But otherwise it sounds awesome!

@ Properly Improper
fixed it

@ Properly Improper
It's great! Although I thought we were going to include the dates in the chapters (or even 'Mid January', etc.) so that it's easier to keep track as dates are important for this story?

@ Halliwell
Oh yeah! I totally forgot about that while writing. I'll fix it! :)

Should I start my chpter with her telling Zayn?

@ Properly Improper

@ Halliwell

@ ace merrill.

@ EmzyStilinski
You can do whatever you want! If you want the chapter to cover more though, maybe start with her telling Zayn.